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2007-09-16, 11:01 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
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My first free site.Take a look
This is my first free site http://www.allpussypictures.com/freesites/fs1/bbw/
Any input or suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks Last edited by bebe123; 2007-09-16 at 11:20 AM.. |
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2007-09-17, 08:44 AM
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The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep
Join Date: Feb 2003
Location: Blasdell, NY (shithole suburb south of Buffalo)
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With a quick glance, you only have 5 recip links on there (I require 6), a lot of the pics are out of order, some of the pics are not completely uploaded, the table that the thumbs are in is too small which means it's stretching & the text is off center.
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2007-09-17, 11:57 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
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ok thanks Greenie,i hope to made a good free site for future
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2007-09-17, 12:38 PM
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I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish.
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Yep, you need more recips or you'll get rejected at most LL's. You can safely use 15 button recips or even 20 if you make your own text recips. Text recips look better too.
I would suggest using more sales text on every page to feed those SE spiders and to make the pages more interesting. They're a bit empty and bland. But for a first site I think you've done very well. Its excellent. 
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2007-09-18, 01:39 AM
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I've always wondered if there was a god. And now I know there is -- and it's me
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Location: Canada Eh!
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Greenie already pointed out what I was going to suggest. Pics out of order and not enough recips.
One more thing is you might want to make your header stand out a bit more. Add some bigger text or whatever, just make it pop a bit more.
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2007-09-18, 07:35 AM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
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Location: midwest
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I like the thumbs, bigger and good quality. Nice.
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2007-09-18, 08:10 AM
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wtfwjd?
Join Date: May 2007
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Could just be me, but the line: "Fuck those skinny bitches" hangs my brain up a little with the double meaning...probably a minor thing. I do like the site.
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2007-09-20, 04:43 AM
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Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos!
Join Date: Jan 2007
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I think you made a great freesite.
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2007-09-20, 08:09 AM
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Where there's a will, I want to be in it.
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Looz-e-anna
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Nice site, but I agree with the "more recips" thing. Put more recips on each mirror, and make fewer mirrors, which leads to fewer dupes in the SEs.
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2007-09-20, 01:25 PM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
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Not bad for a first one!
A few things - 1. The thumbs in the galleries are huge, you could make them half the size and they'll still be large enough. 2. The thumbs are also not aligned properly - is that on purpose? 3. You have a lot of text in the text links themselves. I usually do 1-2 lines of unlinked text, then a big in-your-face linked line. I have seen reviewers comment about not linking entire paragraphs, not sure how they would treat your text. 4. On the second gallery, they can easily center the page and jack off to the gallery. They get full view of the whole set, large enough thumbs and no ads to distract them... maybe put some ads in the middle there to prevent that.
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