Need a review and some advice

[tigermom]

http://www.captainhorny.com/cock-sucking-babes/

This is my latest, which I plan on submitting tomorrow.

Some background about me might be necessary at this point. I have 5 years of web publishing experience in mainstream. I have over 70 mainstream sites and right now 95% of my income is from that. I'm a beginner in adult.

In mainstream it's generally assumed that surfers have become blind to all forms of banners and the best way to get them to click and buy is by using text links only.

Hence, my design here makes relatively little use of ads. I do have about one small banner per page and an image I put together for my ad on the main page but that's it.

Also, in the main page, I went with a review kind of page by the personna I want to develop for this hub. I really did visit the site I'm promoting (the members area), so the review is "for real" in that sense. It's also there as spider food for the SE's. I wonder what old-timers here think about this approach?

Thanks in advance!