Newbie needs help

HowlingWulf · 2007-02-22, 02:13 PM

Splash/warning page looks sharp and clean.

Main page needs to grab the surfer immediately.

Seeing prices right away could drive off a lot before they even check out the site. I wouldn't put them on the main page.

Have some welcome text at the top with a row of thumbnail shots of your best stuff to grab the surfer's attention.

What's the actual name of the site? I couldnt tell. I do see a banner for www.teencamgirl.be but that doesn't grab me much. I don't even know what the .be extension is.

Try to stand out more from all the other camgirls. Do you have something you particularly like? Lingerie, boots, a certain toy, whatever. Concentrate on that and build yourself a catchphrase. You want something specific and get in the search engines for it. Some type of roleplaying might be good here.

Title has grammatical errors.
Meta description is just a list of keywords.

2007-02-22, 02:13 PM	#9
HowlingWulf Me fail English? That's unpossible! Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: FL Posts: 1,381	Splash/warning page looks sharp and clean. Main page needs to grab the surfer immediately. Seeing prices right away could drive off a lot before they even check out the site. I wouldn't put them on the main page. Have some welcome text at the top with a row of thumbnail shots of your best stuff to grab the surfer's attention. What's the actual name of the site? I couldnt tell. I do see a banner for www.teencamgirl.be but that doesn't grab me much. I don't even know what the .be extension is. Try to stand out more from all the other camgirls. Do you have something you particularly like? Lingerie, boots, a certain toy, whatever. Concentrate on that and build yourself a catchphrase. You want something specific and get in the search engines for it. Some type of roleplaying might be good here. Title has grammatical errors. Meta description is just a list of keywords. __________________ WordPress Porn directory theme => Maddos Create a Porn Tube => Video Pornster