Critique Our HFS please

[Selenia]

Heya

Got the HTML template from our designer the other day, and I've been working on adding in the text and content to for our hosted free sites. Before I get any additional templates or do up some more sales text, I wanted to ask for critiques and criticism for what we've done so far.

A few things that I was thinking might be an issue is my overly verbose self that can't stop rambling (not sure if there's too much text there), and bolding the text. I haven't seen it done on many freesites, but I use that a lot on my blogs - is it too aggressive?

Of course, tips and tweaks for everything else are much appreciated as well! tweak. After all, you're the ones that are going to (hopefully!) be using them.

The only things that I don't quite have in yet are alt and title tags for images and links (will be adding those in for the finalized freesites). Anyway, here's the link to the freesite, have at me, and thank you in advance for any advice!

http://vintageporncafe.com/freesite-sample/