Critique my first site?

[DangerDave]

Originally posted by garett
It says "Next Door Nikki In Pigtails" .. which describes the content featured on the site. I agree with your point .. but my site doesn't just say "Next Door Nikki" .. I elaborated to include the content featured.

If that is still not enough then do you have any suggestions for what someone would title a page like that? It is a site who's soul purpose is to feature and promote Next Door Nikki afterall.

Would 'Pictures of Next Door Nikki' be less deceptive for you ?

"Next Door Nikki In Pig Tails" is fine for a site title, but the addition of the yellow header causes the problem. It dominates the page and looks like the sites true title.

Next time you do a Next Door Nicki site, and use that header again... you may get declined for "templates"..

This site would work just as well without the yellow header on each page and the text title "prettied" up a bit.


Plenty of people will list it as is... but that doesn't make it the best way to do it...

DD