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2005-03-27, 11:20 PM
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A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one!
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Texas
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Need Review
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2005-03-27, 11:41 PM
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"Without evil there can be no good, so it must be good to be evil sometimes" ~ Satan
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Motor City, baby, where carjacking was invented! Now GIMME THOSE SHOES!
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Don't see anything there that will keep you from getting listed. If I were you I'd add a few graphic ads to your text links on the gallery pages. A banner with text right above or below is considered to be one link by just about everyone, and the text links don't really jump off the page like they could. As an option you could also change your link color to make it stand out a bit more. That said, I'd list it
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2005-03-28, 04:15 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Jun 2004
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your site looks really plain.
what Madmax had suggested would improve your site and might have a chance of getting listed.
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2005-03-28, 09:02 AM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
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I agree, a little on the blah side. And the ads dont really stand out.
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2005-03-28, 09:15 AM
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Dirty Undies, NY
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Those colors aren't overly enticing. Rather drab, don't you think? I'd make the thumbs a bit bigger and clearer. The one I downloaded was only 2.5kb, so you have room to play. Your target should be 5-7kb each depending on the initial pic quality. Also, in your text links, don't lowercase the paysite domain. Uppercase the first letter of each word so they are distinct, like LingerieSins.com. Otherwise is looks like one long indecipherable nonsensical word. There are a couple of minor spelling errors you could fix as well.
It's listable in its present form, but it could be much better with just a little tweaking.
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2005-03-28, 07:34 PM
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My wife is not a doobie to be passed around! On our wedding day I promised to bogart her for life!
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Cleveland Ohio
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Your site doesn't break any major rules which makes it listable. However, you use the word "blonde" 10 times and the word "watch" 7 times. You might wanna spice up the text a little and try not to repeat the same word too many times. Try using other words that are synonymous. An online thesaurus could assist in helping you to improve your text..
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