Please review my new free site

RawAlex · 2005-06-25, 12:52 AM

Okay, the enter link thing is a HUGE issue. The enter link must be MUCH clearer, and should be at least the same size font as what huge text link right above it. You might want to re-jig the site slightly to move those two links apart slightly.

My bigger concern is that some of your most prime advertising space is taken up with ads for penis pills and getting laid. First off, if this is sponsor content, I am not 100% sure you can use the content with this type of promotion on the gallery pages. More importantly, it distracts people from what they came looking for, and rather than leading to sales, might actually cut down on the click outs to the membership site you are promoting.

Some of the images are over 100k. You don't need to be quite that generous!

Never make it easy to see more galleries - make them click forward. Put a "more hot pics and videos at her official site, click here to see more" and life is good. You give the people a way to move forward off the site onto the sponsor.

MOST IMPORTANT: Your site is too wide. 760 is just too wide, it will sideways scroll a bit in 800 X 600 window. Try to keep to about 720 - 730 to avoid this.

It's not a horrible site. A few touchups and you are well on the way.

Alex

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2005-06-25, 12:52 AM	#4
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	Okay, the enter link thing is a HUGE issue. The enter link must be MUCH clearer, and should be at least the same size font as what huge text link right above it. You might want to re-jig the site slightly to move those two links apart slightly. My bigger concern is that some of your most prime advertising space is taken up with ads for penis pills and getting laid. First off, if this is sponsor content, I am not 100% sure you can use the content with this type of promotion on the gallery pages. More importantly, it distracts people from what they came looking for, and rather than leading to sales, might actually cut down on the click outs to the membership site you are promoting. Some of the images are over 100k. You don't need to be quite that generous! Never make it easy to see more galleries - make them click forward. Put a "more hot pics and videos at her official site, click here to see more" and life is good. You give the people a way to move forward off the site onto the sponsor. MOST IMPORTANT: Your site is too wide. 760 is just too wide, it will sideways scroll a bit in 800 X 600 window. Try to keep to about 720 - 730 to avoid this. It's not a horrible site. A few touchups and you are well on the way. Alex