Desperate please help!

[Halfdeck]

Your sites don't look half bad Cyberhound. Your main goal now should be to reach 1000 clickthrus/day by building more sites, which should get you much closer to 1 sale/day. Here's my opinion:

/suckacock/

- The photos look like vid caps.

- The recip table is a bit confusing. I'd make the LL site names bold and put some kind of border around the recip links with a header saying "Check out my friends" or something like that. The way you have it, a casual surfer doesn't know what those links are for.

- the warning text is also confusing for the same reason - I'd either use a unique font for them or put a border around it.

-"Come And Play With Becky This Amateur Just Loves To Play!" Is a run-on sentence.

- I avoid using the same banner twice in one free site, and always accompany banners with clickable text. In fact, I usually get more clicks if I use an unlinked thumbnail (of decent size) and good text.

/double/

- The red, yellow, and green text here doesn't work for me.

- The enter link is dark red, hard to find.

- You're also using the same banners multiple times here.

- Personally, I'd go into pimproll and choose a lower monthly price here, since this site looks pretty generic and IMO is a hard sell even with a $1 trial (which turns into 34 bucks a month).

- Nice horny text here, but I'd add more sales text for the "label readers."

- Some decent photos in here, but some are too small, and overall they look somewhat repetitive.

/winter/

- Nice header gfx.

- Your sitename is "Perfect Tits" but then on your index, you show a thumb of the girl's ass...

- The most unique feature of any girl on a solo-girl site is her face...so if I was going to show a girl's ass, then I'd make sure the surfer can also see her face.

- That table with the girls ass also will not get read... the paragraph is too long. I would break it up, emphasize key features in bold for people rushing to see the pics.

- Nice pics.

/naughty/

- Looks great. Only thing I would change is the same banner used on every page.

/goddess/

- There are some lukewarm pics in here that look like vid caps. If I'm selling a solo-girl site, I use only her best pics...and try not to use full-nudes.

/gspot/

- nice.

/kylieteen/

- Looks good, except too much info on the index, using font that's hard to read.

- I'd center the free site.

- I love the pics, but the price is WAY too expensive IMO. And the tour doesn't really do a great job of saying much about the 16 bonus sites. I personally would use one 3rd outlink to link to a hub that links to 16 free sites, each free site devoted to one of the bonus sites. It'll make your free site more "sticky" and from there you can send your traffic to one of your more large-scale sites.

Good luck.