Please critique this new tour I've been working on.

[dareutwo]

"The most explicit & extreme thong bikini site on the net!"
Do you have verified proof from a third party?
If not, that's false advertising, sold cars for way too many years. One lawsuit and you'll be finding out quick if in fact you are.

Not exactly sure what bikini surfers are interested in (just my 1.67 cents Canadian) - however.
I'd tease them more, don't show them completely naked. Have them find that inside.