Need some feedback on new tour

bart666 · 2009-12-11, 03:35 AM

thanks HowlingWolf, appreciated

I changed the girl on left as you suggested.
removed transfer rates and changed "bonus videos" for "DVD quality videos"
grammar errors checked as far as I can tell
I didn't put 'Number of beautiful teen girls' because it's too subjective and some surfers wouldn't agree after checking the base
the first 4 small thumbnails in claire's video are just temporary (there will be 4 extreme closeups there) as for the text there

Any other ideas, anyone?

2009-12-11, 03:35 AM	#4
bart666 Heh Heh Heh! Lisa! Vampires are make believe, just like elves and gremlins and eskimos! Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 70	thanks HowlingWolf, appreciated I changed the girl on left as you suggested. removed transfer rates and changed "bonus videos" for "DVD quality videos" grammar errors checked as far as I can tell I didn't put 'Number of beautiful teen girls' because it's too subjective and some surfers wouldn't agree after checking the base the first 4 small thumbnails in claire's video are just temporary (there will be 4 extreme closeups there) as for the text there Any other ideas, anyone? __________________ 18CloseUp - Teen Orgasms in HD

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