Looking for reviews of my freesite.

[cobrasnake]

Originally Posted by ynuahayt

Oy man none of your sites has a Title (it just says untitled document!)! You should definitely add that to all of your pages . And if I were you I would write some more sales text on most of your pages . Some sites also require that you add a 2257 statement on your warning page or a text link to it .

Oh yeah and Tommy's takes money to list your site (because of great traffic and to weed out cheaters) and since your a newbie I figure you haven't payed the amount to him yet, so no need for a recip to him unless you plan on paying him

Well actually I'm going to add titles, I was just looking for opinions on the way the site looked atm. I haven't submitted it to anywhere yet, just wanted to make sure that everything was with in reason for most LL before doing so.

Also as I said I'm just now getting back into this business so I guess that kind of makes me a newbie. But I use to make sites, so I'm not a complete newbie. As for Tommy I actually had him on my old ICQ list and not sure if he even remembers me though. I think I was on his referral list (I guess that's what you would call it). I have no clue if I still would be and don't have his ICQ # anymore but I'm willing to pay the money if I have to.

Not sure if I can afford the extra cash atm though but will as soon as I can.

[cobrasnake]

Oh btw thanks for your comments and advice though.

I agree with you about needing more sales text on my pages.

Figured I would start from here and than try to improve my pages and sales pitches as I go along

[caringneo]

You need more sales texts. Also your links need to stand out. Try using a different font.
About getting listed -Your warning page looks ok except for the title tag. On your main page you have to get rid of those banners. The first banner got images which looks like thumbs. The second one is a kind of blind link. Also try to stay away from using the words young and teen together. Make those changes you should be fine in getting listed.
Neo

[cobrasnake]

Thanks Neo I will try to work one some of that.

Btw when you say try to stay away from using the words young and teen together you mean during the same text..etc correct?

Just wondering because I thought I fixed the ones that had both words in them? or did you just mean don't use the word young at all on a site that has the word teen in it?

[ynuahayt]

Originally Posted by cobrasnake

Thanks Neo I will try to work one some of that.

Btw when you say try to stay away from using the words young and teen together you mean during the same text..etc correct?

Just wondering because I thought I fixed the ones that had both words in them? or did you just mean don't use the word young at all on a site that has the word teen in it?

I think you should'n't use the word young at all on any sites, it's banned at some sites to use it even in text like "30 year old horny mature feeling young and out looking for cock"

[cobrasnake]

Ok I've made several changes to the site and as always feel free to give your opinions.

http://www.sexplusporno.com/sexyteengirls/

Thanks,