please review my site

Xeno · 2005-06-28, 06:41 AM

I think its ok...and as madleinx said about the links "On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately...." Just making it one link would work best.

The only thing I would say is that I would probably still approve the site if it was submitted to my link directory, but would give a few design pointers on your layout and colour coordination. You might want to try to keep your thumbs all the same such as all verticle or all horizontal...not a major issue, but some LL's and directories might say something.

Keep at it though....every gallery site you create will only get better with each one

Halfdeck · 2005-06-29, 11:24 PM

Hey OKN,

One minor thing I noticed in your source is you have no keyword/description metas. Also, on your index.html and gallery pages, the <HTML></HTML> and <DOCTYPE> are missing. You also may want to use an ICRA tag, and add ALTs to your images.

P.S. Using "gallery 1: Hardcore blonde fucking" and/or adding a TITLE="Blonde fucked from behind" (for example) may get better SE hits later on than just "Gallery 1".

The gif on the index page was too small on my monitor to read, and wasn't flashy enough to grab my attention. But I'm pretty sure it's not breaking any LL rules.

2005-06-28, 06:41 AM	#1
Xeno Do you want the job done right, or do you want it done fast? Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 494	I think its ok...and as madleinx said about the links "On your gallery pages, you have too many links in your text. You linked each line of text separately...." Just making it one link would work best. The only thing I would say is that I would probably still approve the site if it was submitted to my link directory, but would give a few design pointers on your layout and colour coordination. You might want to try to keep your thumbs all the same such as all verticle or all horizontal...not a major issue, but some LL's and directories might say something. Keep at it though....every gallery site you create will only get better with each one __________________ Why I never sleep anymore... Web Designing

2005-06-29, 11:24 PM	#2
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	Hey OKN, One minor thing I noticed in your source is you have no keyword/description metas. Also, on your index.html and gallery pages, the <HTML></HTML> and <DOCTYPE> are missing. You also may want to use an ICRA tag, and add ALTs to your images. P.S. Using "gallery 1: Hardcore blonde fucking" and/or adding a TITLE="Blonde fucked from behind" (for example) may get better SE hits later on than just "Gallery 1". The gif on the index page was too small on my monitor to read, and wasn't flashy enough to grab my attention. But I'm pretty sure it's not breaking any LL rules. __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.