Will it Fly? I would appreciate feedback

[Simon]

Hiya T Pat... glad to see you're making progress on this idea.

I'm looking forward to seeing how the 'no-brainer' scripts handle the problems we're all having with RSS feeds.

I'll toss my 2 cents in to say I agree with how the bold text, the centering, the punctuation, and other things pointed out, do work against you for what I think you're trying to do. But fortunately, all of that is easy to tweak.

Alex's points about the product name itself, and about too much time spent putting down the competition, are very good ones.

You could just have another page on "what's wrong with how RSS usually works" for those who care about that. Or maybe a sidebar with a contrasting color background and smaller font size, so it's 'extra' info, not your main message.

As far as the name is concerned, if you're set on "RSS No Brainer," then there are some ways to work with that. But "No Brainer RSS" does work better I think. (I also was thinking about "EasyRSS" and "ReallyRSS" as alternatives for you.)

Okay, maybe a little more that 2 cents.

Simon

[furrygirl]

I agree with the other posters.

Why would we trust you to be our writer when everything we've seen of you is chock full of spelling and grammar errors, and is formatted and written so it's hard to read? Please, please, get a basic grade school English text book. Your capitalization, plurals, punctuation, and sentence structure is just too hard to understand.

[MadMax]

Originally Posted by furrygirl

Your capitalization, plurals, punctuation, and sentence structure is just too hard to understand.

Should read "Your capitalization, plurals, punctuation [remove comma] and sentence structure are [not "is"] just too hard to understand."

Tpat: All I see on that page ATM with Firefox is a Yahoo News RSS feed |noclue|

[furrygirl]

Originally Posted by MadMax

Should read "Your capitalization, plurals, punctuation [remove comma] and sentence structure are [not "is"] just too hard to understand."

I've never claimed to be perfect, and that's the second error someone has so excitedly pointed out to me since I joined this board.

All I can say is, I'm not the one here to get ya'll to pay me for "Writeing add copy" for your sites.