Review required please

[RawAlex]

Okay, the second gallery is missing, so no comment there.

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

[GriseyV2]

Originally Posted by RawAlex

4 lines of linked text on the inside page isn't a good idea. You might want to add a little more unlinked text, and then link the key part or phrase. linking all of the text is unnatural and sort of rubs me wrong.

Changed

Originally Posted by RawAlex

Space the site out a bit as well... it seems a little bit scrunched up. Don't be scared to throw in some extra line feeds and spacers to give things a chance to breathe.

Alex

I put some more spaces on the main.php do you think the galleries could do with more spaces ?

Originally Posted by Fonz

It's probably not a good idea to show her topless on the first gallery and completely clothed on the second gallery. It could be that the second gallery uses a different picture set but I'd use that one as gallery 1 and not gallery 2.

Changed them around

Originally Posted by Fonz

Also on the gallery pages the links to the sponsor didn't look very appealing to me, try to grab the surfer's attention a little more.

Is that any better ?

Thanks for checking it over guys would help helpful if you did again just to check the changes are better

Wayne