Make our designer Cry

[GonZo]

Originally Posted by Greenguy

These do look a lot better than the last ones

http://amateurpkwy.com/freesites/tgp/rxp1018/01/ -
- Your designer seems to use a lot of odd color combinations & the red text on the purple background on the warning & gallery pages is a good example
- The text in places seems a bit Roman Maroni:
"Enjoy Watching Her As She Enjoys Sucking And Pounding This Huge Cock In Her Breast While Waiting For The Cum To Explode In Her Face!!"
1 - too many enjoys
2 - is "she" really pounding the cock in her breast?
3 - the cum is going to explode "in" her face?

http://stripperstreet.com/freesites/tgp/rxp233/01/ -
- "THIS STRIPPING SLUT IS NASTY AS HELL AND SHE WANTS YOU TO WATCH. HER TAKING OFF HER CLOTHES, SUCKING COCK, EVEN FUCKING!"
What's with the period (new sentence) after "watch"?

There's more bad grammar on the sites, but I think you get the idea. If these were submitted to me, I'd probably decline them based on the text

And, what I'd like to see are the next free sites for each...I know how your designer likes to use the same content over & over & over....

I think his designer spends too much time looking at some of my old free sites to choose color combinations.