4th attempt

[Greenguy]

I'm gonna guess that the warning page is http://www.laurensands.com/freesites...bble-butt.html

In the most basic sense, it's fine, but you might want to look into adding more text to the main & gallery pages - there's a lot of dead space on them that could be used to push surfers to the paysite.

[Preacher]

I'd like to see "Lauren Sands" in the text next to the Click Here To Visit Me Now, to let the surfer's know who or what they are visiting. It borders on a blind link without them.

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by Preacher

I'd like to see "Lauren Sands" in the text next to the Click Here To Visit Me Now, to let the surfer's know who or what they are visiting. It borders on a blind link without them.

I have to disagree, but only because if I was reviewing this particular site, I'd know that it was Logan & Lauren building & submitting, so the whole 1st person thing is fine by me & probably works better as far as marketing & clicks.

Now, if it was a Briana Banks site that said Click Here To Visit Me Now I'd giggle as I clicked the decline button

[Preacher]

Originally Posted by Greenguy

I have to disagree, but only because if I was reviewing this particular site, I'd know that it was Logan & Lauren building & submitting, so the whole 1st person thing is fine by me & probably works better as far as marketing & clicks.

Now, if it was a Briana Banks site that said Click Here To Visit Me Now I'd giggle as I clicked the decline button

I know what you're saying, and it's the exact reason I approved the last site he submitted to my list.

That said, if one of my many native Russian submitters had used the same text I would have rejected it.

I like what Mr Yum said above, don't give a reviewer a reason to reject, because not everyone will be familiar with Logan, and putting 'my name is Lauren Sands' in the non-linked text next to the click here to visit doesn't seem like that much of a barrier to sales to me, but I'm no sales expert.