Ban for bad grammar

[adam123]

Originally Posted by Greenie

I told you the problem here:
http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...583#post334583
You said you were going to correct it & resubmit it, yet I still see the incorrect grammar on there - and when I advise someone of a problem here on the board, they say they'll fix it & then I see it again & again & again, why should I bother to even review your sites? You obviously don't listen nor do you do what you say you will in your post, so now you're blacklisted.

(as far as the listing, if some of them slipped thru, then I'll have to go slap around a couple of reviewers)

So the only problem is:
Free 12 Black Gay Movie Clips ?

You told me about Free 8 pregnant Movie clips but i thought this title:
Free 12 Black Gay Movie Clips is ok.

I will now change this title in my last fs to:
Free 12 Movie Clips

Will it be ok?

[oldbrad]

Originally Posted by adam123

I will now change this title in my last fs to:
Free 12 Movie Clips

Will it be ok?

Your best bet will be to look at link lists (pretty much any) and look at the titles. You need to get away from the use of free and quantity of the movies. Using "Black Guy Cocks" or "Gay Cock Lovers" might work better for you in the future. Describe the content, not just say "24 Free Pictures" as the title.

You'll be better off that way, using spell check as much as you can and checking what other people do as far as descriptions and titles to your sites.

[adam123]

Originally Posted by oldbrad

Your best bet will be to look at link lists (pretty much any) and look at the titles. You need to get away from the use of free and quantity of the movies. Using "Black Guy Cocks" or "Gay Cock Lovers" might work better for you in the future. Describe the content, not just say "24 Free Pictures" as the title.

You'll be better off that way, using spell check as much as you can and checking what other people do as far as descriptions and titles to your sites.

I have no problem with spelling. I didnt know that putting 12 free black gay movie clips will be grammar error. I changed all this on my old fs and i will not use it in future.

[Useless]

Originally Posted by adam123

I will now change this title in my last fs to:
Free 12 Movie Clips

Will it be ok?

That proved GG's point. Free 12 Movie Clips is nonsensical. Being able to spell doesn't really mean much if you don't understand word order or even which words work together. As oldbrad said, you need to be far more creative with your titles and, I assume, your descriptions.

[adam123]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

That proved GG's point. Free 12 Movie Clips is nonsensical. Being able to spell doesn't really mean much if you don't understand word order or even which words work together. As oldbrad said, you need to be far more creative with your titles and, I assume, your descriptions.

Thanks.

[Mr Exotic]

Hahaha after hearing the non english speaking webmaster issue on the radio show, and reading the threads about it, I just had something else remind me about this just now. On Mike and Mike In The Morning (espn radio show that is on ESPN 2 from 6am-10am and I watch/listen to religously every morning) they have been talking about the most marketable players in sports. They then brought up the foreign players such as Dice K and Yao Ming, and how they are raising stars and if they could have an impact on future marketing. It then was said they they dont see how they could market english speaking products in an english speaking market place if they couldnt even speak the language. I thought Greenie could appreciate those comments, haha

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by Mr Exotic

...I thought Greenie could appreciate those comments, haha

You heard it here 1st: ESPN Employs Racists

[Fonz]

Originally Posted by Mr Exotic

Hahaha after hearing the non english speaking webmaster issue on the radio show

Yeah, my name gets mentioned a few times... Ah well.

I did laugh at the way you guys pronounced Mateusz

[Greenguy]

Originally Posted by Fonz

Yeah, my name gets mentioned a few times... Ah well.

I did laugh at the way you guys pronounced Mateusz

But I love you Fonz

And how do you pronounce it? It's not ma-toose?

[Fonz]

Originally Posted by Greenie

But I love you Fonz

And how do you pronounce it? It's not ma-toose?

Something like "ma-teh-oos" probably