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guti::
I haven't really looked at your sites.... the grammar is hurting my eyes. I'm sure there are english classes where you live, and getting a better grasp of the english language will help a lot if you want to continue in this biz.
By the way, having a capital letter after "." or "!" is standard in any language, even the European ones.

Second, make sure the whois of the domain you're using tells who the owner of the domain (in other words YOUR name, or the name of your company), not that the owner of the domain hosted with xxx want to be anonymus. That is if you want to be listed...........

.com (even .net) is standard in this biz, if you want to learn, listen to the webmasters that's been here for a while. They won't tell you what you want to hear, they will tell you what you need to hear....
If your sites won't get listed, how is the pagerank going to help you??

So, improve your english, read and remember what people have written in this thread and start over again. Instead of linking one poor site after the other, try to make one real good one and repeat what you learn making that one.
People will correct your grammar, your spelling and other things for you (as they did with your first page) but asking for help with site number two with the same errors will get old pretty fast.....

Good luck.