My First Free Site! Please Come And tell me what you think about it :D

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I'm far from an expert on freesites... But there are some things I'd do different.
"Teens plays with cock" Gives me a page not found.

Make sure to have different text on different freesites. Try to describe what's going on in the pics.... Try tease the surfer, make him horny. Make sure the text fit the actual page, having "Like this teeny getting banged by this 2 guys? Wait to see the other ones getting banged in this site! CLICK HERE TO ACCES" on a gallery with one guy and one girl.... makes no sense. (and you got to fix the spelling and grammar too)
If you're submitting to the category anal, make sure the galleries show anal.....


I won't go through each of the galleries making comments. The biggest problem you have is your spelling and grammar, and no matter how good freesites you make the poor english will make a lot of Link Lists not list you.....

As I told you in my first answer to you, you can't link to a lot of pages asking people to comment every one of your creations..... As long as you haven't been taking the time to correct the things pointed out, why should I spend time commenting the same errors over again??

If your sites are getting listed, they are good enough..... That's a clue for you there......

But, as I told you, I'm no expert. I don't have a LL, and I don't submit a lot of freesites either.... So what do I know lol.