Please Critique My First Freesite

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Originally Posted by dragonfly08

Hello Everyone. Happy 4th of July. I have created my first freesite. Any constructive criticism is appreciated:

http://www.she-loves-porn.com/asian/asian070704/

-Dragonfly08

Nice start.
What Annie said and:

You have a < title > Free Asian Porn and Cams If that's the name of your site put in on the index page. I'm not sure where the "and cams" comes into play. It's not mentioned anywhere on your site. Might want to just name it Free Asian Porn.

On your gallery pages you have banners and no text. Text sells. Put some juicy text above the banners and linked text below. Tell the surfer what you want him to do. "Click Here For The Free Tour At Beijing Beavers" "Click here for the trial, it's only......" "Join right now and start downloading in minutes" "The best asian porn is at Beijing Beavers! Click here to get it!" Something that tells your surfer to click and why he should click.