Looking for more advice on getting better conversions or more signups

Bill · 2004-02-06, 07:40 PM

This may not be the forum for this, but here's some suggestions.

Take a look at this site:
http://www.sickkittens.com/fs/blow-jobs/amateurs/

The top of your index page is your #1 sell spot, the most valuable real estate in the whole site. So you want to put your best ad and your best text there. The only thing that can possibly be more important to put there is search engine text. You have your warning there.

Your sell there is smallish text:
TEEN BLOW JOBS AT ITS FINEST
< < Check out Angels of Porn > >

Grammatically clumsy, and your call to action is passive. You have to be excited with your text, vehement, and 100% clear about what you want your surfer to do.

Down below, under your weakass banner (why weakass? just look at it! Are you fucking telling me that's the prettiest girl sucking cock you could find in that sponsors banners?) you say:

Tons of Cock Craving Sluts

What does that mean? what does it say? nothing. It's not even true, not from the surfers point of view. No excitement, no lust. Most important, it doesn't tell the surfer what to do, why they should act.

You can't be casual about the text linked to your banners, it's the most important thing on the site.

I'm going to do you a favor and not make specific suggestions about text. It's hard work, writing text, but thats where the money is.

2004-02-06, 07:40 PM	#1
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	This may not be the forum for this, but here's some suggestions. Take a look at this site: http://www.sickkittens.com/fs/blow-jobs/amateurs/ The top of your index page is your #1 sell spot, the most valuable real estate in the whole site. So you want to put your best ad and your best text there. The only thing that can possibly be more important to put there is search engine text. You have your warning there. Your sell there is smallish text: TEEN BLOW JOBS AT ITS FINEST < < Check out Angels of Porn > > Grammatically clumsy, and your call to action is passive. You have to be excited with your text, vehement, and 100% clear about what you want your surfer to do. Down below, under your weakass banner (why weakass? just look at it! Are you fucking telling me that's the prettiest girl sucking cock you could find in that sponsors banners?) you say: Tons of Cock Craving Sluts What does that mean? what does it say? nothing. It's not even true, not from the surfers point of view. No excitement, no lust. Most important, it doesn't tell the surfer what to do, why they should act. You can't be casual about the text linked to your banners, it's the most important thing on the site. I'm going to do you a favor and not make specific suggestions about text. It's hard work, writing text, but thats where the money is.