Are my blog descriptions rubbish?

marcjacob · 2007-08-10, 05:13 AM

Yeah i see that. I think i need to do some research, i have kind of jumped into it with both feet. I should have read some straight blogs first to get a feel for what im meant to be writing.

Thanks for the advice so far i apreciate it, any more very welcome!

marcjacob · 2007-08-10, 05:22 AM

BTW id love to say that im better at Gay but i think that needs spicing up too. I guess the nuances advices is where im trying to head but not really getting it? Is that what makes the sales?

walrus · 2007-08-10, 03:30 PM

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Originally Posted by marcjacob

BTW id love to say that im better at Gay but i think that needs spicing up too. I guess the nuances advices is where im trying to head but not really getting it? Is that what makes the sales?

Personally, I try to paint a fantasy with words which entices the surfer to click further.

But then again, I prefer the soft sell. I look at like I'm doing the pre-sales work and then turn it over to the sponsors tour for the hard sell.

2007-08-10, 05:13 AM	#1
marcjacob If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 34	Yeah i see that. I think i need to do some research, i have kind of jumped into it with both feet. I should have read some straight blogs first to get a feel for what im meant to be writing. Thanks for the advice so far i apreciate it, any more very welcome!

2007-08-10, 05:22 AM	#2
marcjacob If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 34	BTW id love to say that im better at Gay but i think that needs spicing up too. I guess the nuances advices is where im trying to head but not really getting it? Is that what makes the sales?