Would you accept this gallery?

hashbury · 2008-01-10, 12:36 PM

Thanks Fonz and Ramster
The gallery was giving me a bunch of problems. So im going to forget about that one. I have made another gallery using the information you guys told me.
http://freepornpicturez.com/firstgal/index1.html
I think this one should be fine. The only thing ive noticed after working on it for an hour is the colors kind of stick out to much. But just let me know what u think.
Thanks so much for the help

Toby · 2008-01-10, 01:27 PM

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Originally Posted by hashbury

http://freepornpicturez.com/firstgal/index1.html

Better, but this one has a bit too much text, surfers will just scan right past those paragraphs. I'd replace each with a single well worded sentence that makes a specific point. Your job is to get the surfer to click through to the site to find out more.

Also, your bottom linked text is still completely passive. No sense of urgency to go visit the site NOW! How 'bout this:
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2008-01-10, 12:36 PM	#1
hashbury My name is hashbury not assburry Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa Posts: 1,125	Thanks Fonz and Ramster The gallery was giving me a bunch of problems. So im going to forget about that one. I have made another gallery using the information you guys told me. http://freepornpicturez.com/firstgal/index1.html I think this one should be fine. The only thing ive noticed after working on it for an hour is the colors kind of stick out to much. But just let me know what u think. Thanks so much for the help __________________ Sig Goes Here!