My first free site needs a review.

japamor · 2008-02-01, 04:44 PM

Pork
Welcome to the board. You're in the right place.

Its a pleasing design but your warning on your first page is way too big, its a waste of space.

Put text under and over your banners or replace some banners with text - you'll get better results.

I counted 7 sites being advertised - that's spreading your message too thinly - focus on 1 or 2 sites over your 4 pages, 7 sites is just confusing the surfer.

But if that's your first site you've made a good start!

Cheers

2008-02-01, 04:44 PM	#1
japamor I Love Turkish Delight, they're very moreish. Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: UK Posts: 578	Pork Welcome to the board. You're in the right place. Its a pleasing design but your warning on your first page is way too big, its a waste of space. Put text under and over your banners or replace some banners with text - you'll get better results. I counted 7 sites being advertised - that's spreading your message too thinly - focus on 1 or 2 sites over your 4 pages, 7 sites is just confusing the surfer. But if that's your first site you've made a good start! Cheers __________________