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I'm going to the backseat of my car with the woman I love, and I won't be back for TEN MINUTES
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Hi Matthew. First off I would lose all the links at the top (Home, Submit, etc.). Replace "Sample Gallery" with a description of the action (scene).
Lose the "hi's". Enhance the "Click Here for more Rachel Starr". Maybe a little animation (don't overdue it), or just play with the font and make it stand out a little. |
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