Please review my newbie “state of the art” site

Bill · 2004-02-18, 06:40 PM

Your warning is way too big.

Banners without attached linked text repel sales.

Your text, that stuff on the main page, is better than a lot I've seen, but not good enough. Keep reworking it.

8 pics per gallery? won't get accepted. 4 gallerys? Arguably too many pics overall.

Your content is okay, some small problems, and the big SCORPIO text that isn't clearly a copyright will not get accepted in some places.

You've got the right general idea, just needs more work. Then get a real host.

2004-02-18, 06:40 PM	#1
Bill Selling porn allows me to stay in a constant state of Bliss - ain't that a trip! Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,914	Your warning is way too big. Banners without attached linked text repel sales. Your text, that stuff on the main page, is better than a lot I've seen, but not good enough. Keep reworking it. 8 pics per gallery? won't get accepted. 4 gallerys? Arguably too many pics overall. Your content is okay, some small problems, and the big SCORPIO text that isn't clearly a copyright will not get accepted in some places. You've got the right general idea, just needs more work. Then get a real host.