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2006-10-20, 12:23 PM
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Lord help me, I'm just not that bright
Join Date: Oct 2006
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do you like it?
http://www.exhibitionist-sluts.com/freesite3/
i remade it added more text shrunk some things down for those still living in the dial up ages.  |
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2006-10-20, 01:54 PM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Sunny Florida!
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 From the beginning... Index page... I know you said you've shrunk down some things, but this page is still waaaay too heavy for a free site. Speed tests return: 56K 41.00 seconds Now, surfers may wait around for a paysite to load...they may even hang around for their favorite link list to load. But, when cruising through free sites, surfers have a pretty short attention span...you're going to lose them quickly on that page. The shrinking didn't get the page light enough, but it did accomplish making the images fuzzy looking  The red text on the lower bg color is almost invisible. Something to consider...when building free sites, text is your friend...image heavy pages are not. You'll need a title on this page...it should match the title tag on the page. Note: Your site title cannot be the same as or almost the same as the paysite you're promoting. Main page... There's not continuity in the site...this page looks completely different than the entry page...there's no 'theme' to the site at this point. This page is probably still too heavy, though it is much better than the entry page in that respect. The blue text links on the gray bg are borderline color wise. They're visible, though they certainly don't pop off the page. Gallery one... The color scheme here sort of ties in with the main page. Kinda plain...little to no text to entice the surfer. No real 'problems' on this page though. Gallery two... Color sheme matches with gal one and sort of with the main page. A bit more text on this page...which is good. The color of the text and links does blend into the bg more than it should. Overall issues... The content doesn't really fit well together. In gal one, you've got a chick getting naked and posing. Gal two is an asian chick posing...holding another girl, then sucking and fucking in the last few pics. Since this is a pornstar site and both girls are pornstars, you'll probably get a little latitude for the mixed content. But, the site would get listed better and sell better if there was some continuity to the content. That's about all I got  |
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2006-10-20, 03:15 PM
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Bow Ties Are Cool
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: California
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And as I stated in the other thread for the same site it redirects to http://www.voyeurdorm.com/
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2006-10-20, 03:49 PM
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Lord help me, I'm just not that bright
Join Date: Oct 2006
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