Newby would like your thoughts

alcorp · 2006-11-07, 03:59 AM

Hi there, I'm new to the board, but not to the industry, been submitting galleries for a few years now and thought i'd try my hand at freesites, yout opinions would be appreciated

http://www.hotmomhardcore.com/hotmom01/index.htm

Fonz · 2006-11-07, 04:47 AM

I don't see anything fundamentaly wrong at first sight.
A few things that maybe could be better:
- You're relying mostly on banners to get the surfer to the paysite. You should try using more textlinks, but don't make them blind links. A good textlink will have a much higher clickthrough ratio than most banners.
- Try using tables with fixed sizes, now you're using <table width="98%"> which looks way stretched on a bigger screen resolution

DJilla · 2006-11-07, 05:42 AM

You might want to alt tag the pics and add a little more descriptive text. The conventional wisdon is the FS is going to serve you a little better in the search engines than galleries typically do. Ditto on the more and better text links and you could text your 2257 link instead of making it live..

bbwebmaster · 2006-11-07, 05:52 AM

It looks ok to me.

Preacher · 2006-11-07, 11:24 AM

Some linklists have a rule about a maximum of 3 lines of linked text. Even if they don't have that rule some will decline for it anyway.

So I'd unlink some of that text.

alcorp · 2006-11-07, 12:06 PM

Cheers guys for the advice, its noted and much appreciated

2006-11-07, 03:59 AM	#1
alcorp Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Posts: 9	Newby would like your thoughts Hi there, I'm new to the board, but not to the industry, been submitting galleries for a few years now and thought i'd try my hand at freesites, yout opinions would be appreciated http://www.hotmomhardcore.com/hotmom01/index.htm

2006-11-07, 04:47 AM	#2
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	I don't see anything fundamentaly wrong at first sight. A few things that maybe could be better: - You're relying mostly on banners to get the surfer to the paysite. You should try using more textlinks, but don't make them blind links. A good textlink will have a much higher clickthrough ratio than most banners. - Try using tables with fixed sizes, now you're using <table width="98%"> which looks way stretched on a bigger screen resolution __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2006-11-07, 05:42 AM	#3
DJilla You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 525	You might want to alt tag the pics and add a little more descriptive text. The conventional wisdon is the FS is going to serve you a little better in the search engines than galleries typically do. Ditto on the more and better text links and you could text your 2257 link instead of making it live.. __________________ Submit Free Sites, Blogs, Movies, TGP's, Triple XXX Info

2006-11-07, 05:52 AM	#4
bbwebmaster WHO IS FONZY!?! Don't they teach you anything at school? Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: ...in the box Posts: 45	It looks ok to me. __________________ Silly rabbit, Trix are for kids!

2006-11-07, 11:24 AM	#5
Preacher There's Xanax in my thurible! Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Wherever they screw on my head Posts: 2,441	Some linklists have a rule about a maximum of 3 lines of linked text. Even if they don't have that rule some will decline for it anyway. So I'd unlink some of that text. __________________ NSCash * This Depraved World

2006-11-07, 12:06 PM	#6
alcorp Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: UK Posts: 9	Cheers guys for the advice, its noted and much appreciated