Adding to Preacher's comments (which you'll definitely want to implement btw)...hidden whois and invisible recips will get you declined regularly.
Add a line or two of juicy text above and/or below your banners...make the surfer want to click. Just plain banners don't pull well at all anymore.
This is one of my personal peeves...not sure how other reviewers feel about it though. Sponsor links like "See blah blah on OUR site" or "Join US blah blah". To me those kinds of links imply that the paysite is under the same ownership as the site the surfer is currently on. This kinda muddies the water as to making it clear the link leads to a paysite not associated with where he is now. Again, jmo...but am curious what other reviewers think of this practice.
Back to your review
Your gallery pages on the first site could easily be wider and still fit at 800 wide (if you choose to widen em up, make sure they still fit at 800). Opening those up a bit would allow you to increase your text link size and possibly even your thumbs...and still have a nice balance on the page.
Other than those minor details...damn fine looking sites
