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Old 2007-08-06, 04:35 PM   #10
Useless
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Your domain name is atrocious. It doesn't exactly scream erotica. All I envision is sex with animals.

The aesthetic of the free site is straight out of the 90s. It's seem tossed together and the color choice is odd. White text on lilac doesn't work. Use a darker text color, but not red. The red text is even worse.

I too don't like that you've chosen to make Adult-List's recip into a pic. It had two links in it and now you've given it one. If it was somehow destroying your table, you could have figured out why quicker than screen capping it.

The two banners in succession after your recip table looks crappy. Separate them with your over-sized warning text.

There is a problem with your For the Girls links. You may want to find out why. Click one of your CCbill links when you have the time.

Why is the enter link in quotes? Whom are you quoting?

Your sponsor links open in new windows. They shouldn't.

Your 2257 statement isn't worth piss. You may as well toss it. I don't think text requires such a statement anyway.

Your story text is center aligned. Tell me, have you ever read a book in which the text is centered? Why do you suppose that is?

Those thumbs on each story page are blind-linked to your poorly named story site.
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