Rate my first free site

[Useless]

Your domain name is atrocious. It doesn't exactly scream erotica. All I envision is sex with animals.

The aesthetic of the free site is straight out of the 90s. It's seem tossed together and the color choice is odd. White text on lilac doesn't work. Use a darker text color, but not red. The red text is even worse.

I too don't like that you've chosen to make Adult-List's recip into a pic. It had two links in it and now you've given it one. If it was somehow destroying your table, you could have figured out why quicker than screen capping it.

The two banners in succession after your recip table looks crappy. Separate them with your over-sized warning text.

There is a problem with your For the Girls links. You may want to find out why. Click one of your CCbill links when you have the time.

Why is the enter link in quotes? Whom are you quoting?

Your sponsor links open in new windows. They shouldn't.

Your 2257 statement isn't worth piss. You may as well toss it. I don't think text requires such a statement anyway.

Your story text is center aligned. Tell me, have you ever read a book in which the text is centered? Why do you suppose that is?

Those thumbs on each story page are blind-linked to your poorly named story site.

[japamor]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Your domain name is atrocious. It doesn't exactly scream erotica. All I envision is sex with animals.

LOL! UW's right. My first thought was exactly the same.

The design of the site is very disjointed. It looks like bits and pieces thrown together with no overall plan.
If you look at Old Brad's story site you can see the difference betwen his planned design and your more chaotic design.
Also text recips like Old Brads can be incorporated into your design more easily than button recips.
There's a hell of a lot to learn when you first start out. Keep trying, keep building and don't give up.

[beastor]

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Your domain name is atrocious. It doesn't exactly scream erotica. All I envision is sex with animals.

I am actually looking for a cartoon involving a wolf in sheeps clothing doing the whole herd of sheep lmao vbg

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

The aesthetic of the free site is straight out of the 90s. It's seem tossed together and the color choice is odd. White text on lilac doesn't work. Use a darker text color, but not red. The red text is even worse.

My female art major consultant used the words "arty and classy".

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

I too don't like that you've chosen to make Adult-List's recip into a pic. It had two links in it and now you've given it one. If it was somehow destroying your table, you could have figured out why quicker than screen capping it.

All fixed. I still am not completely sure what the problem was but i fixed it.

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

The two banners in succession after your recip table looks crappy. Separate them with your over-sized warning text.

Done

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

There is a problem with your For the Girls links. You may want to find out why. Click one of your CCbill links when you have the time.

I mailed them again. Each time they assure me that everything is correct.

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Why is the enter link in quotes? Whom are you quoting?

You got me there lol. All fixed

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Your sponsor links open in new windows. They shouldn't.

All fixed. Back to the official button code

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Your 2257 statement isn't worth piss. You may as well toss it. I don't think text requires such a statement anyway.

That was amusement lol

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Your story text is center aligned. Tell me, have you ever read a book in which the text is centered? Why do you suppose that is?

It was 4am. That is fixed as well

Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Those thumbs on each story page are blind-linked to your poorly named story site.

This is a trial run and I am still learning. I do still need a bit of traffic for other projects.
Once I have a site that most lists will accept then it will probably get a different domain name like ...
Eroticstoriesthatblowsocksoff.com vbg or ..
Itypeandtheypurr.com/eroticstories/theylove/toread

Sorry for joking here but I knew I was going to take a pounding with beastor