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Hi Kalle, I have to agree about the pic on the left, sorry. lol Otherwise great work. It's a lot of text and a lot of surfers won't read most of it... but it's mainly there for the SE's... the surfers will find what they want by the pics and read what they want.
I noticed a few little things in the text ... like 'come and watch my photos' should probably be 'see my photos' or 'view' or 'check out' even. A few s' on the ends of words that they shouldn't be on like, 'shares' and 'hungers'....
And, a few mis-spelled words (probably typos) like feautering (featuring) and devided (divided).
I think you should leave most of them, except for maybe the mis-spelled words.... The site is done in first person, and with her being russian it seems more authentic to me and may have guys thinking about her accent. Not a bad thing imho.
Good luck with the site!
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