Need your opinion on my new design..

Trev · 2004-09-21, 05:40 PM

Hi Kalle, I have to agree about the pic on the left, sorry. lol Otherwise great work. It's a lot of text and a lot of surfers won't read most of it... but it's mainly there for the SE's... the surfers will find what they want by the pics and read what they want.

I noticed a few little things in the text ... like 'come and watch my photos' should probably be 'see my photos' or 'view' or 'check out' even. A few s' on the ends of words that they shouldn't be on like, 'shares' and 'hungers'....

And, a few mis-spelled words (probably typos) like feautering (featuring) and devided (divided).

I think you should leave most of them, except for maybe the mis-spelled words.... The site is done in first person, and with her being russian it seems more authentic to me and may have guys thinking about her accent. Not a bad thing imho.

Good luck with the site!

2004-09-21, 05:40 PM	#1
Trev Is it over already? Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: the beautiful shores of Lake Erie Posts: 890	Hi Kalle, I have to agree about the pic on the left, sorry. lol Otherwise great work. It's a lot of text and a lot of surfers won't read most of it... but it's mainly there for the SE's... the surfers will find what they want by the pics and read what they want. I noticed a few little things in the text ... like 'come and watch my photos' should probably be 'see my photos' or 'view' or 'check out' even. A few s' on the ends of words that they shouldn't be on like, 'shares' and 'hungers'.... And, a few mis-spelled words (probably typos) like feautering (featuring) and devided (divided). I think you should leave most of them, except for maybe the mis-spelled words.... The site is done in first person, and with her being russian it seems more authentic to me and may have guys thinking about her accent. Not a bad thing imho. Good luck with the site!