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Hey, i'm new in this arena, actually four days

Here are some free sites i have done.

http://www.pornomagix.com/Iwantamateur/index.html

http://www.pornomagix.com/Hugedicksl...cks/index.html

please rewiev them, say some comments, what i can do better, what to change or what i did good.

It is taking me about 4 Hours to design one free site, and i think its too long what do you think should help me to design these sites qiucker?