First Attempt- Please critique

[emmanuelle]

While I've been in the paysite biz since 99, this is my first attempt at a freesite (go figure)

I'd love it if people more experienced than I could take a look, and let me know if I'm on the right page, as well as the liklihood of it being listed.

http://www.wickedskinmedia.com/work/...lack/freesite/

Many thanks in advance!