Review my free site!

xxxjay · 2004-08-30, 06:42 PM

LOL - makes me feel like a newbie again. These are some free hosted sites we are trying to perfect for linklist owners to send traffic to.

Security man did most of it and I modified a few things. Is there anything that you would change?

http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/18i/interracial_sex/

plateman · 2004-08-30, 07:59 PM

There great looking jay, and I'll take as many as you got..

Greenguy · 2004-08-30, 08:18 PM

Let me 1st say that you know I love ya

1 - Too graphic intesne & "flashy" looking for my taste.

2 - You're already falling into "template" mode.

Ramster · 2004-08-30, 08:43 PM

A free site that should sell. Nice layout.

No need for 3 galleries. Especially with that many pics per gallery. A little too flashy and not needed.

Overall though, they do look good.

Cleo · 2004-08-30, 08:51 PM

I like the look of the site. Lots of real text which is good.

I agree that it only needs two galleries.

Thumbler · 2004-08-30, 09:26 PM

I always thought hardcore on the warning page was a big no no - but what do I know?

xxxjay · 2004-08-30, 10:11 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Greenguy
Let me 1st say that you know I love ya

1 - Too graphic intesne & "flashy" looking for my taste.

2 - You're already falling into "template" mode.

I welcome the criticism!

That's why I posted here - because this is where all of the linklist people hang out.

I agree that maybe the sites are a little graphic heavy, and yeah - the galleries might be everykill.

What about reducing each gallery to 15 pics?

plateman · 2004-08-30, 10:12 PM

A lot of FHS are without warning pages or there's hardcore on the index Its a LL or tgp site that should have a warning before the sites or galleries..

security_man · 2004-08-30, 10:24 PM

oh sure jay, place all the blame on me

the real question is, is there anyone out there that would not list it? acually - if we just did 2 galleries of 10 pics each would that be too little? All info is always welcome

ps Thumbler, most of them do have the hardcore censored on the index, i didnt do it on this one cuz those pics were so small - good point tho

tiny · 2004-08-30, 10:40 PM

I don't know if I should say this but the quality of your grabs isn't good. Alot of blurrie ones and jagged edges.
I say this because if your going to also use it for people to use and make their own galleries to post alot will get declined via TGP's and MPG's.
Screen grabs should come from AVI's to get the best and with the faded colors they don't look too good.
If you have it at digital format and captured them you first start out as BMP's then go from there with compression to jpegs.
Way too much over saturation also.Don't make the mistake that a flashy design gets folks off and since your just starting the sites do it right or you'll always fall into it looks ok.Hell I've spent to much time tweakin a AVI before capture and its no fun but it needs to be done.
I like the design though its a pet peve of mine with video I guess.
And if you capture it and it doesn't look good don't use it for ads stick it in the site .Just my two cents I guess

Useless · 2004-08-30, 11:08 PM

That is undeniably gorgeous and the text is great. As a builder, my only suggestions would be in reinforcement of what others have said. Knock it down to two galleries of 15 thumbs each.

Greenguy · 2004-08-30, 11:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by security_man
...the real question is, is there anyone out there that would not list it?...

My greedy side tells me that yes, I would list them - LOL

Blue_Spade · 2004-08-30, 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Greenguy
My greedy side tells me that yes, I would list them - LOL

Long live the greed!

Fonz · 2004-08-31, 04:10 AM

The 2nd thumb on gallery 3 leads to a broken image.
I would reduce the amount of pictures/galleries too.

Other than that it looks great

xxxjay · 2004-08-31, 06:34 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Fonz
The 2nd thumb on gallery 3 leads to a broken image.
I would reduce the amount of pictures/galleries too.

Other than that it looks great

I agree - I think 3 galleries of 15 pics is a good layout. Thanks for everyones input.

How about the ads? Too much? Too little? Just right?

AcidMaX · 2004-08-31, 07:50 AM

They look good Jay. Let us know when they are live

Opti · 2004-08-31, 10:54 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by security_man
oh sure jay, place all the blame on me

the real question is, is there anyone out there that would not list it? acually - if we just did 2 galleries of 10 pics each would that be too little? All info is always welcome

ps Thumbler, most of them do have the hardcore censored on the index, i didnt do it on this one cuz those pics were so small - good point tho

I like it as it appears clickable for a surfer to me.. dont care about the extra gallery personally but think the more interested the surfer is to click about a free site the mroe chance they will be intersted enough to check out sponsor.

If you just want to know if it would be accepted or not... I reckon some reviewers i know would knock it back for this banner if it was a regular submission ;-)

http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/18i/inte...i_468x80_3.gif

xxxjay · 2004-08-31, 03:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Opti

If you just want to know if it would be accepted or not... I reckon some reviewers i know would knock it back for this banner if it was a regular submission ;-)

http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/18i/inte...i_468x80_3.gif

OK, here is where we stand:

1. On 90% of the sites the galleries have been knocked down to 15-16 pictures.

2. Personally, I like the 3 gallery thing. It makes it more like a site rather than two galleries with some superfluous pages IMO.

3. We are working on busting out another series of less template looking and less graphic intensive sites.

4. We are working on video sites. I think video converts better. I am having the videos embedded on html pages for these. I'd like to bounce that off some of your here.

If you are currently an occash beta tester, you can grab the new sites in the adtools by clicking on "free" in the table. If you are interested in getting in on the occash beta test and listing these sites email me jay@occash.com.

Thanks for everyone's from this boards. Your opinion is important to me.

AcidMaX · 2004-08-31, 03:26 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by xxxjay
OK, here is where we stand:

1. On 90% of the sites the galleries have been knocked down to 15-16 pictures.

2. Personally, I like the 3 gallery thing. It makes it more like a site rather than two galleries with some superfluous pages IMO.

3. We are working on busting out another series of less template looking and less graphic intensive sites.

4. We are working on video sites. I think video converts better. I am having the videos embedded on html pages for these. I'd like to bounce that off some of your here.

If you are currently an occash beta tester, you can grab the new sites in the adtools by clicking on "free" in the table. If you are interested in getting in on the occash beta test and listing these sites email me jay@occash.com.

Thanks for everyone's from this boards. Your opinion is important to me.

Cool nice to have an affiliate program that listens to their whiny webmasters

I will make sure I get someone to start entering the freesites in smutlinks soon

-Andy

urb · 2004-08-31, 04:27 PM

Nice job security_man and Jay

Alphawolf · 2004-08-31, 04:45 PM

Nice colors and overall design, but as others mentioned a bit too much on the graphics.

Why such prominent ENTER EXIT buttons?

That let me ignore the blinking ad text at the bottom and head straight for that big ENTER button.

Graphics smaller and thumbs bigger?

Nice though. Puuuuurty colors.

security_man · 2004-08-31, 04:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Alphawolf
Nice colors and overall design, but as others mentioned a bit too much on the graphics.

Why such prominent ENTER EXIT buttons?

That let me ignore the blinking ad text at the bottom and head straight for that big ENTER button.

Graphics smaller and thumbs bigger?

Nice though. Puuuuurty colors.

lol i know i know... it drove me nuts doing that but on most of them i had a shitload of space to fill on the index page so i had to put giant enter and exit buttons... i also know alot of owners are real picky about them so i made sure there werent any problems

this batch im woking on now should be much closer to regular free sites we are all used to seeing

Alphawolf · 2004-08-31, 05:17 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by security_man
l i also know alot of owners are real picky about them so i made sure there werent any problems

No worries there.

Okie dokie...enough of this- you have that rejected site of mine early this AM that is fixed and waiting your approval kind sir!

xxxjay · 2004-08-31, 06:03 PM

Here's a few links to some of my favorite free sites that security man has built for us:

http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/first_time_anal/
http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_hardcore/
http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_movie/
http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_sex/

Good, no? I think it's a big improvement.

digifan · 2004-09-01, 12:52 PM

These are very nice... but the big pics are a tad bit blurry to me.

2004-08-30, 06:42 PM	#1
xxxjay You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: atlanta Posts: 1,787	Review my free site! LOL - makes me feel like a newbie again. These are some free hosted sites we are trying to perfect for linklist owners to send traffic to. Security man did most of it and I modified a few things. Is there anything that you would change? http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/18i/interracial_sex/ __________________ Circle Of Violence

2004-08-30, 07:59 PM	#2
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2004-08-30, 08:18 PM	#3
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2004-08-30, 08:43 PM	#4
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2004-08-30, 08:51 PM	#5
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2004-08-30, 09:26 PM	#6
Thumbler You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: GA Posts: 598	I always thought hardcore on the warning page was a big no no - but what do I know? __________________ Out of date sig!

2004-08-30, 10:12 PM	#8
plateman What can I do - I was born this way LOL Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: ohio Posts: 3,086	A lot of FHS are without warning pages or there's hardcore on the index Its a LL or tgp site that should have a warning before the sites or galleries.. __________________ Submit to: Porn O Plenty XXX Links Reality Here

2004-08-30, 10:24 PM	#9
security_man Are you sure this is the Sci-Fi Convention? It's full of nerds! Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Texas Posts: 260	oh sure jay, place all the blame on me the real question is, is there anyone out there that would not list it? acually - if we just did 2 galleries of 10 pics each would that be too little? All info is always welcome ps Thumbler, most of them do have the hardcore censored on the index, i didnt do it on this one cuz those pics were so small - good point tho __________________ <a href="http://www.linkalotapuss.com/home.php" target="_blank"><font face="Trebuchet MS">Linkalotapuss.com</a> - Submit your sites</font>

2004-08-30, 10:40 PM	#10
tiny Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: maine Posts: 447	I don't know if I should say this but the quality of your grabs isn't good. Alot of blurrie ones and jagged edges. I say this because if your going to also use it for people to use and make their own galleries to post alot will get declined via TGP's and MPG's. Screen grabs should come from AVI's to get the best and with the faded colors they don't look too good. If you have it at digital format and captured them you first start out as BMP's then go from there with compression to jpegs. Way too much over saturation also.Don't make the mistake that a flashy design gets folks off and since your just starting the sites do it right or you'll always fall into it looks ok.Hell I've spent to much time tweakin a AVI before capture and its no fun but it needs to be done. I like the design though its a pet peve of mine with video I guess. And if you capture it and it doesn't look good don't use it for ads stick it in the site .Just my two cents I guess Last edited by tiny; 2004-08-30 at 10:51 PM..

2004-08-30, 11:08 PM	#11
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	That is undeniably gorgeous and the text is great. As a builder, my only suggestions would be in reinforcement of what others have said. Knock it down to two galleries of 15 thumbs each. __________________ Click here to purchase a bridge I'm selling.

2004-08-31, 04:10 AM	#14
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	The 2nd thumb on gallery 3 leads to a broken image. I would reduce the amount of pictures/galleries too. Other than that it looks great __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2004-08-31, 07:50 AM	#16
AcidMaX Programming till my fingers bleed. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Michigan Posts: 876	They look good Jay. Let us know when they are live

2004-08-31, 04:27 PM	#20
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2004-08-31, 04:45 PM	#21
Alphawolf Don't come to Florida for vacation. We're closed. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Orlando, Florida Posts: 1,874	Nice colors and overall design, but as others mentioned a bit too much on the graphics. Why such prominent ENTER EXIT buttons? That let me ignore the blinking ad text at the bottom and head straight for that big ENTER button. Graphics smaller and thumbs bigger? Nice though. Puuuuurty colors. __________________ Regards, AW Weekly Pay. Sites That Convert. Start Pimpin' Today!

2004-08-31, 06:03 PM	#24
xxxjay You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: atlanta Posts: 1,787	Here's a few links to some of my favorite free sites that security man has built for us: http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/first_time_anal/ http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_hardcore/ http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_movie/ http://free.ocxxx.com/sites/tb/anal_sex/ Good, no? I think it's a big improvement. __________________ Circle Of Violence

2004-09-01, 12:52 PM	#25
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