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2006-09-13, 07:18 PM
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Stupid risks make life worth living
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Critique my 1st Freesite Index
http://www.amateur-wife.net/freesite1.htm
Is this OK? Before I put the rest of it together... Thanks! |
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2006-09-13, 07:39 PM
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The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep
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That looks fine.
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2006-09-13, 08:37 PM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
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It has a side scroll at 800x600. There are some linklists that still care about that.
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2006-09-13, 08:44 PM
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Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you
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You are only using 2 outgoing links, 3 are allowed not counting 2257
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2006-09-13, 09:25 PM
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The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep
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Quote:
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2006-09-13, 09:55 PM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
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2006-09-13, 11:22 PM
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Stupid risks make life worth living
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You know I built it at 755px wide... When I preview in FF it is fine but in IE it does have a little side scroll???????? I will fix that... I was afraid that I might be nailed for having 4 outgoing links since the text links are separate from the image links...If not I will definitely throw another on ;-)
What's the couch mean  |
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2006-09-14, 01:48 AM
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There's Xanax in my thurible!
Join Date: Apr 2005
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It means I wasn't intentionally taking a shot at Greenie for ignoring the rule he just got rid of as un-important.
 Any linklist worth submitting to is only going to see 2 outbound links on that page. You're golden. |
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2006-09-14, 06:49 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
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Nice but where's is the rest of the site?
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2006-09-14, 07:40 AM
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Stupid risks make life worth living
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I have the rest up now... Does it look OK?
Ahh Shit...Pics are too small  Last edited by jonnydoe; 2006-09-14 at 07:47 AM.. |
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2006-09-14, 08:10 AM
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Former pr0n slinger.
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http://www.amateur-wife.net/neighbors_mom.htm
On that page you have 13 lines of linked text. Some LL owners don't like that. Best thing you can do is to just link the "call to action" text like "Watch them here" or "Click here". Other than that your site looks fine  |
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2006-09-14, 08:18 AM
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Stupid risks make life worth living
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I resized the pics and took your advice on the linking Fonz... Thanks!
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2006-09-14, 08:28 AM
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The Original Greenguy (Est'd 1996) & AVN HOF Member - I Crop Pics For Thumbs In My Sleep
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2006-09-14, 09:03 AM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
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Overall pretty nice. You have room to put a black border around pics if you want though its strictly personal taste. Also some opinoins run that its best not to have pricing info and let the surfer find out by clicking thru. Might jazz it up with some unlinked sales text and REALLY important don't forget good metatags... descriptive title and content desc. but still overall pretty good.
Again personal taste but some like to offer a link to an alternate site in the same genre but different sponsor. Last edited by DJilla; 2006-09-14 at 09:06 AM.. |
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2006-09-14, 10:28 AM
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Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs!
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Very clean site...well done
Completely agree with DJilla...a little juicy sales text is always a good idea |
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2006-09-14, 10:40 AM
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Bow Ties Are Cool
Join Date: Jun 2006
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If you are going to continue using this domain to build other freesites you might want to change your url structure. Right now its amateur-wife.net/freesite1.htm but would be easier for you later if you set the site up in its own folder so the structure looks like this amateur-wife.net/freesite1/.
Plus I would change the freesite1 to something a little more creative like the title of your site. Just a thought. Other than that I would list it |
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2006-09-14, 11:04 AM
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Stupid risks make life worth living
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Thanks for all the great input guys!
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2006-09-26, 08:50 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
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Looks nice,well done
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2006-09-26, 09:48 AM
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Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you
Join Date: May 2006
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Your site looks good, just slap on some recips and submit!
Good luck |
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