2nd freesite review please

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 10:40 AM

I still have to change the recips, but you get the idea. It's for category uniform or stockings, any input before I fire it off is much appreciated! thanks again GG crew.....
http://justsheer.com/striptease/index.html

Tekster · 2008-07-21, 10:48 AM

Enter Only Tease on the main page might be considered blind by some LL, and check your 2257 links. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:01 AM

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Originally Posted by TekAngel

Enter Only Tease on the main page might be considered blind by some LL, and check your 2257 links. Otherwise I think it looks pretty good.

doh they moved their 2257 page, will fix that thanks! as for "Enter Only Tease" the paysite is onlytease, is "enter" no good on freesites? what do i say, "This way to Only tease" "See more at Only tease" how do i get them to enter if i cant say enter? Thanks for the help

hashbury · 2008-07-21, 11:16 AM

ENTER is one of those words that can tend to trick the surfer. I really never use the word enter on my warning page accept to link to the main page. You can use click here for only tease or use your text. Since only tease is the site name you could probally use Enter Only Tease on your other pages.

LD · 2008-07-21, 11:19 AM

Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:22 AM

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Originally Posted by hashbury

ENTER is one of those words that can tend to trick the surfer. I really never use the word enter on my warning page accept to link to the main page. You can use click here for only tease or use your text. Since only tease is the site name you could probally use Enter Only Tease on your other pages.

ok thanks, i only have "enter" once on the index, thats to go to the main. so i guess the "enter" on the main is no good, ok I'll change it right away.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:23 AM

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Originally Posted by LusciousDelight

Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

thanks. its a uniform niche freesite so i think surfers like the uniforms on abit more than usual. I'll just get rid of the "enter" on all the pages.

Licker4U · 2008-07-21, 11:25 AM

Since "Enter Only Tease" is on the main page and not on the index page it should be OK. It's not blind because it gives the name of the site the surfer is going to. As already stated, the word "Enter" on the index page should be there only once, which goes to your main page. Only problem I see is that Best Wet Pussy isn't in the recip table......

hashbury · 2008-07-21, 11:26 AM

I was thinking you would be submitting to the lingerie cat. where you dont need full nudity. Any other categories you might have a problem with non nudity.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:27 AM

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Originally Posted by LusciousDelight

Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful.

Good looking site, overall.

ok, i changed "Enter Only Tease" text links to "Click Here for Only tease". I don't really wanna put a .com on my text, im not a fan of type ins.

Licker4U · 2008-07-21, 11:29 AM

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Originally Posted by LusciousDelight

Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites.

Just my opinion but I disagree. It's promoting a tease site so a lot of nudity isn't required, imho. Surfers might be more inclined to click over to the tour hoping to see more and if they don't get more on the tour they may pay for the opportunity to see more. Just my .02

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:29 AM

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Originally Posted by Licker4U

Since "Enter Only Tease" is on the main page and not on the index page it should be OK. It's not blind because it gives the name of the site the surfer is going to. As already stated, the word "Enter" on the index page should be there only once, which goes to your main page. Only problem I see is that Best Wet Pussy isn't in the recip table......

thats what i thought but the word "enter" kept arising here, so i just swapped it, no biggie. thanks for your input.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:32 AM

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Originally Posted by hashbury

I was thinking you would be submitting to the lingerie cat. where you dont need full nudity. Any other categories you might have a problem with non nudity.

i think it will be ok, uniform, stockings, lingerie categories. i do alot of tgp subbing as well and they get listed no sweat, if the webmaster doesnt wanna list it, ah well, on to the next one. i can see not listed in babe or big tits, but its a pretty niche specific gallery.

hashbury · 2008-07-21, 11:41 AM

You could also start using text recips for any of your upcoming freesites. Although, its not required at all, I think it gives the site a more professional look.
I think your on a great start, probally a lot better than the rest of us started. Now the only thing you need to do, is build, build, and build.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 12:10 PM

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Originally Posted by hashbury

You could also start using text recips for any of your upcoming freesites. Although, its not required at all, I think it gives the site a more professional look.
I think your on a great start, probally a lot better than the rest of us started. Now the only thing you need to do, is build, build, and build.

sounds good and thanks for the help. can i see an example of this? i put a text recip where? on my main? index? to upcoming freesite? so i guess i gotta be one ahead of them?

annie_cash · 2008-07-21, 01:08 PM

It looks fine, I would olny make the Enter on the index page a little bigger, or move it in a way in doesnt end up on the very bottom of the page. It maight look kinda hidden for some link lists.

Useless · 2008-07-21, 03:46 PM

Many places will count that 2257 link as one of your 3 links and reject you for for being over 3. I'm not overly sensitive about the number of links out, BUT I'd reject it since 2257 pages shouldn't have anything except legal info on them, not join and tour links like that one. Either drop the link or copy their legal info on to your site.

Lemmy · 2008-07-21, 10:43 PM

The 3rd thumb in the bottom row on gallery 1 is linked to the wrong pic. Site looks nice.

lazzlo · 2008-07-21, 11:54 PM

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Originally Posted by Useless Warrior

Many places will count that 2257 link as one of your 3 links and reject you for for being over 3. I'm not overly sensitive about the number of links out, BUT I'd reject it since 2257 pages shouldn't have anything except legal info on them, not join and tour links like that one. Either drop the link or copy their legal info on to your site.

thats a good point, they changed the page to that recently and am going to ask them to put it on a single page, thanks

lazzlo · 2008-07-22, 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Lemmy

The 3rd thumb in the bottom row on gallery 1 is linked to the wrong pic. Site looks nice.

doh, that was bonehead of me, thanks alot for pointing that out. you guys are great!

spacemanspiff · 2008-07-22, 08:17 AM

I'm not very picky about any of that stuff. "Enter" in the affiliate link, ads on 2257, etc. If the site has some nice pics/vids that my surfers will enjoy, has a reasonable number of ads, and the links to sponsors aren't BLATANTLY deceptive, I'll list it.

lazzlo · 2008-07-22, 06:23 PM

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Originally Posted by spacemanspiff

I'm not very picky about any of that stuff. "Enter" in the affiliate link, ads on 2257, etc. If the site has some nice pics/vids that my surfers will enjoy, has a reasonable number of ads, and the links to sponsors aren't BLATANTLY deceptive, I'll list it.

you made the 20th reply on my 1st one too.

spacemanspiff · 2008-07-23, 06:53 PM

Ahhh,.... I did that on purpose. Yeah.....that's the ticket.

smutguy · 2008-07-23, 07:28 PM

Good to see you getting advice over here lazzlo

keep up the good work on your freesites

btw you have a PM

lazzlo · 2008-07-24, 07:47 AM

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Originally Posted by smutguy

Good to see you getting advice over here lazzlo

keep up the good work on your freesites

btw you have a PM

2008-07-21, 10:40 AM	#1
lazzlo A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 55	2nd freesite review please I still have to change the recips, but you get the idea. It's for category uniform or stockings, any input before I fire it off is much appreciated! thanks again GG crew..... http://justsheer.com/striptease/index.html __________________

2008-07-21, 10:48 AM	#2
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2008-07-21, 11:16 AM	#4
hashbury My name is hashbury not assburry Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa Posts: 1,125	ENTER is one of those words that can tend to trick the surfer. I really never use the word enter on my warning page accept to link to the main page. You can use click here for only tease or use your text. Since only tease is the site name you could probally use Enter Only Tease on your other pages. __________________ Sig Goes Here!

2008-07-21, 11:19 AM	#5
LD wtfwjd? Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 2,103	Those galleries seem a little short on nudity. We don't even see boobs until the last two or three pics. Might not be dirty enough for some sites. The "enter only tease" wordage is fucking with my brain somehow...I don't know, technically OK I guess but maybe something like ENTER: "onlytease.com" would be more meaningful. Good looking site, overall. __________________ Artisteer Wordpress Theme Generator Create Custom Themes! My Little Network

2008-07-21, 11:25 AM	#8
Licker4U Mean people suck, nice people swallow, are you mean or nice? Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Lower Alabama-The Redneck Riviera Posts: 2,377	Since "Enter Only Tease" is on the main page and not on the index page it should be OK. It's not blind because it gives the name of the site the surfer is going to. As already stated, the word "Enter" on the index page should be there only once, which goes to your main page. Only problem I see is that Best Wet Pussy isn't in the recip table...... __________________ Submit to Girls That Squirt , Hairy Pussy Links and Best Wet Pussy

2008-07-21, 11:26 AM	#9
hashbury My name is hashbury not assburry Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa Posts: 1,125	I was thinking you would be submitting to the lingerie cat. where you dont need full nudity. Any other categories you might have a problem with non nudity. __________________ Sig Goes Here!

2008-07-21, 11:41 AM	#14
hashbury My name is hashbury not assburry Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Tampa Posts: 1,125	You could also start using text recips for any of your upcoming freesites. Although, its not required at all, I think it gives the site a more professional look. I think your on a great start, probally a lot better than the rest of us started. Now the only thing you need to do, is build, build, and build. __________________ Sig Goes Here!

2008-07-21, 01:08 PM	#16
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2008-07-21, 03:46 PM	#17
Useless Certified Nice Person Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Dirty Undies, NY Posts: 11,268	Many places will count that 2257 link as one of your 3 links and reject you for for being over 3. I'm not overly sensitive about the number of links out, BUT I'd reject it since 2257 pages shouldn't have anything except legal info on them, not join and tour links like that one. Either drop the link or copy their legal info on to your site.

2008-07-21, 10:43 PM	#18
Lemmy You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Next door to a kid with a moped. Posts: 1,492	The 3rd thumb in the bottom row on gallery 1 is linked to the wrong pic. Site looks nice. __________________ BUY MY PORNSITES!

2008-07-22, 08:17 AM	#21
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2008-07-23, 06:53 PM	#23
spacemanspiff Where there's a will, I want to be in it. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Looz-e-anna Posts: 1,015	Ahhh,.... I did that on purpose. Yeah.....that's the ticket. __________________ Submit your free sites to Free Sex Pics

2008-07-23, 07:28 PM	#24
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