My First freesite.. is it ok?

[Beaver Bob]

This is the first time I've attempted to do a free site, and I just wanted to see if its something people would list, and get any constructive criticsm possible before i go trying to submit it.

I know the design is nothing special, but is it listable?

http://www.spunkvision.com/fs/blowjob_cumslut_adaire/