what I have sofar minus a warning page

tiny · 2003-08-31, 07:46 PM

Well this is what I have so far as you can tell its kinda plain not great on verbage,but I think that comes in time.Or is it too plain

http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/main.html

DangerDave · 2003-08-31, 09:43 PM

Tiny, The basics are there

Some of the text is a bit hard to read... - try playing with the BG colour and the TEXT colour

Some of the text needs centering too.

The bottom banner on - http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/gal1.html - looks like it is built for a WHITE background. ? and therefore looks a bit tacky..

Same on the second gallery..

Yep - you need more text..

It's a decent start.. and I have seen worse submitted;(

DD

Surfn · 2003-09-01, 02:09 AM

Ditto what DD said.

If it were me I would make the linked text purple so that it jumps out at surfer. Non-linked text I would make black. You do need to use more non-linked text to tease the surfer into clicking the links. IMHO

ewriter · 2003-09-02, 03:11 AM

hey tiny,
what type style are you using? been trying to find that style to use on some of my sites.

Pusher · 2003-09-04, 12:47 PM

Tiny,

Your site is clean and simple - too simple... Make sure you use text under or above banners - it really helps with conversions!

Also, you might try advertising more than one affiliate site per page - more bang for the buck!

bowman · 2003-09-05, 04:12 PM

I'd like to see better quality compression on the images. I can't tell if you've run a filter on the images or they are just compressed at a low quality rate.

This girl looks like she has great skin, but the quality is lost through the compression artifacting around her eyes and mouth.... just my $0.02 worth.

backoffbitch · 2003-09-14, 02:27 AM

The skin definately looks filtered, almost like "auto levels" was ran in photoshop a few too many times

2003-08-31, 07:46 PM	#1
tiny Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: maine Posts: 447	what I have sofar minus a warning page Well this is what I have so far as you can tell its kinda plain not great on verbage,but I think that comes in time.Or is it too plain http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/main.html

2003-08-31, 09:43 PM	#2
DangerDave Bonged Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: BrisVegas, AUSTRALIA Posts: 4,882	Tiny, The basics are there Some of the text is a bit hard to read... - try playing with the BG colour and the TEXT colour Some of the text needs centering too. The bottom banner on - http://www.tinysplace.com/free/chubby/brandi/gal1.html - looks like it is built for a WHITE background. ? and therefore looks a bit tacky.. Same on the second gallery.. Yep - you need more text.. It's a decent start.. and I have seen worse submitted;( DD __________________ Old Dollars >>>> Now with over 90 Hosted Free Sites <<<< DangerDave.com.au - Adult Links to Free Porn

2003-09-01, 02:09 AM	#3
Surfn If you don’t take a chance the Angels won’t dance Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Earth on occasion Posts: 8,812	Ditto what DD said. If it were me I would make the linked text purple so that it jumps out at surfer. Non-linked text I would make black. You do need to use more non-linked text to tease the surfer into clicking the links. IMHO __________________ Surfn's Links Are you a partner?

2003-09-02, 03:11 AM	#4
ewriter If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Landrum, SC Posts: 38	type style hey tiny, what type style are you using? been trying to find that style to use on some of my sites. __________________ Sam E. Phifer

2003-09-04, 12:47 PM	#5
Pusher If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Maryland Posts: 306	Tiny, Your site is clean and simple - too simple... Make sure you use text under or above banners - it really helps with conversions! Also, you might try advertising more than one affiliate site per page - more bang for the buck! __________________ Adult Sex Sites Submit Sites Here Free Sex Pix Submit Sites Here

2003-09-05, 04:12 PM	#6
bowman Internet! Is that thing still around? Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1	I'd like to see better quality compression on the images. I can't tell if you've run a filter on the images or they are just compressed at a low quality rate. This girl looks like she has great skin, but the quality is lost through the compression artifacting around her eyes and mouth.... just my $0.02 worth.

2003-09-14, 02:27 AM	#7
backoffbitch No matter how good you are at something, there's always about a million people better than you Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: New Brunswick Posts: 234	The skin definately looks filtered, almost like "auto levels" was ran in photoshop a few too many times __________________ I'm hot behaving badly.

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