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Old 2005-04-05, 10:24 PM   #1
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Site review please

http://www.archiveofporn.com/Hot-Les...ion/index.html

1)Does my site follow the rules for link list sites?

2)Anything I can do to improve it, please let me know.

And I appretiate any feedback anyone can give me.
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Old 2005-04-05, 10:43 PM   #2
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Howdy!

First off, your title is crap. It's far too generic. You can be more creative than that. The font color you're using makes the recips nearly impossible to read. Use something more legible for them. The text link under the HPA which reads 'Click HERE to enter MORE free porn galleries!! ' may be a no-no. Tell the surfer where they are clicking to.

Your gallery pages need work. They all have horizontal scroll. There are only 8 thumbs on each page. You should really have ten, though I do realize that you have three gallery pages. The thumbs are pixelated and pretty much out of order. You also have a banner on each page which is hotlinked from a toy sponsor. Don't do that.

Your page structure is a bit wacky too.

I don't personally think that the site is listable in its present form, but it's definately fixable.
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Old 2005-04-06, 04:06 AM   #3
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1. the colors you have choosen don't fit together - textlinks are hardly visible
2. 'Click HERE to enter MORE free porn galleries -> not accepted on my LL
3. thumbs are ugly - what software do you use?
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Old 2005-04-06, 04:43 AM   #4
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i would advise you to put a clear "enter here" text directly under the scrolling textbox
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Old 2005-04-06, 07:51 AM   #5
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What's the point of having that .gif animation with the monkey? It just takes up loading time for 56k users.
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Old 2005-04-06, 08:06 AM   #6
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What Joe said, what Rocco said about the More free porn galleries as the link goes to the sponsor so you'll get declined. What UW said about the gallery pages, fonts, title.
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Old 2005-04-06, 09:11 AM   #7
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Thanks for the input! I'll work on fixing these things and try again
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Old 2005-04-06, 09:14 AM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by exiler
Thanks for the input! I'll work on fixing these things and try again
just let us see it first if you want
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Old 2005-05-04, 09:47 PM   #9
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Definitely change the text colours. Also I would only have 2 galleries instead of 3. Just make them bigger. if the surfer isn't going to visit your sponsor on the first 2 chances are they won't on the third therefore you are just eating up more bandwidth.
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Old 2005-05-04, 09:55 PM   #10
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What's up with bumping all these old threads?
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Old 2005-05-04, 10:09 PM   #11
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Thought I read these before..

Looks like the whole forum.

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