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2005-06-01, 10:51 AM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: May 2005
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Please Review My Free Site...
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This is my first post here. Can I get your opinion about my free sites, please? What do I wrong, can I improve something? http://zozonsex.com/imlive/americanbabe/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/countrygirl/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/camgirlsandra/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/lonelygirl/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/teenpussy/1a/index.htm Those are my first five free sites, what I build... Any advice is welcome... Tnnx! |
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2005-06-01, 03:38 PM
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You tried your best and you failed miserably. The lesson is 'never try'
Join Date: Apr 2005
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Looks good for me mate...
But let the experts come over here 
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2005-06-01, 03:51 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Russia, Irkutsk
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Nice sites with good layout. Some of them were submitted to my LL (thanks!) and I listed them, though I have some tips about how to improve them.
First, I see that your "EXIT" link is linked to Google. I think that it is not too wise, find a non-adult sponsor for this purpose. I see that all your sites are based on the same template, on warning page you are changing only site background and after some time of posting you probably will get rejections with a reason "Template site". Also, after some time your convert ratio on these template sites may getting lower. Build 30 different templates and use every of them once a month. I see that you use the same recips table on all of your sites. Many LL's don't like it, because in this case they will lose fresh traffic from their recips. I recommend you to read this topic about templates, it is very useful: http://www.greenguysboard.com/board/...ad.php?p=30947 This site: http://zozonsex.com/imlive/lonelygirl/1a/index.htm has a wrong title "Cam Girl Sandra" on a top of warning page. |
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2005-06-01, 07:03 PM
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You can now put whatever you want in this space :)
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Next door to a kid with a moped.
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They look OK to me. I'm not too crazy about some of the backgrounds though, they're very distracting. Go for a solid, not too bright, color instead.
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2005-06-12, 04:08 PM
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They have the Internet on computers, now?
Join Date: Apr 2005
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Sites look good to me. Clean an easy to look at. Try changeing the template a bit on your next submissions though.
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2005-06-13, 03:40 AM
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Join Date: May 2004
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looks good to me
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2005-06-13, 11:32 AM
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Wheither you think you can or you think you can't, Your right.
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: midwest
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Ya, as said, would be nice to have different templates. Also, some of the recips, the text did'nt show up well, hard to see/read.
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2005-06-13, 04:09 PM
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Certified Nice Person
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Dirty Undies, NY
Posts: 11,268
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I'd have to agree, outside the recip text colors being messed up, the sites look good.
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2005-06-13, 11:12 PM
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Do you want the job done right, or do you want it done fast?
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Canada
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I also have to agree...they look fine to me...but as a webmaster with a link directory, I'm pretty flexible. ...now just have to add them to my LD
AS you build more, try to develop really unique designs for your sites because it creates even more chances of being accepted  |
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2005-06-16, 11:27 AM
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Rock stars ... is there anything they don't know?
Join Date: May 2005
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looks fine but maby a little boring. try to develpo your fantasy
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2005-06-16, 03:57 PM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: May 2005
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OK thanks for advice, I'll try to do some different templates, and change recipes text colors, etc, etc...
http://zozonsex.com/imlive/teenpussy/1b/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/roundbabe/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/uniformbbw/1a/index.htm http://zozonsex.com/imlive/biglady/1/index.htm |
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2005-06-16, 07:51 PM
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Trying is the first step towards failure
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not bad put em on my top 50 is the only comment i got lmao
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Linear Mode
