Quick review please

Star Man · 2006-03-16, 11:10 PM

Hey

Just wanted to know if this one is ready for take off.As always,thanks

http://www.dickheadshit.com/bustychristy.html

natalie · 2006-03-17, 12:00 AM

here goes.. sorry if i offend, not in a great mood lol..

Recips: PK's has a enter on it which may be a prob with some ll's cos its above the real enter link, Mr Yums text is invisible and I think the recip table is ugly.

2nd page: The text "Free Gallery 1" goes to the wrong gallery.
You really should be doing free sites in subdirectorys.
I don't like your gallery layouts, they look messy to me. Maybe line the thumbs up better.

thats all I got, a bit blunt but hey...

Star Man · 2006-03-17, 12:45 AM

Perfect! Just the kind of review I was looking for.

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PK's has a enter on it

I had no idea that certin LL's counted recips that said "Enter" as actual "Enter".Now I know and that banners history!

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The text "Free Gallery 1" goes to the wrong gallery

If you didn't catch that then I sure as hell wouldn't of.

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I don't like your gallery layouts, they look messy to me. Maybe line the thumbs up better

Ok for this one you can just go to hell! JK

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thats all I got, a bit blunt but hey...

No,you were being kind!Being a bit blunt would be "Hey Star Man,Your gallery looks like ass!" or something along those lines.

Anyhow thanks for the review. I'm going to clean it up right now.And please keep the blunt reviews coming.

flyeruk · 2006-03-17, 03:29 AM

Hey,

Hoes banner also has 'Enter Now' on it.

And like Natalie pointed out, most linklists request that the submitted page be an index page within a folder.

So you could have it like this:

http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/index.html --->
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/main.html --->
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery1.html
http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery2.html

Try to keep each site within the one folder, some linklists don't like directory changes within the site.

Hope this helps

Lisa

Star Man · 2006-03-17, 04:02 AM

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Hey,

Hoes banner also has 'Enter Now' on it.

Yep,got it.

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Try to keep each site within the one folder, some linklists don't like directory changes within the site.

Yeah,about that.I kind of went ahead and submitted just prior to posting this review.

At the last second I thought just to be on the safe side I better see what you guys think and decided to post it(good thing).I only submitted this page,no duplicates so Hopefully I can make it past round one without getting knocked out,but if it happens it happens. I FOCKED OP!

Halfdeck · 2006-03-17, 09:36 AM

As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers.

"Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net.

Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely...

http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2.

Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly.

I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial.

EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath

MrYum · 2006-03-17, 11:04 AM

Hey there Star Man...I sent you a PM about this site when I reviewed it last night.

Star Man · 2006-03-17, 11:52 AM

Yeah,I should have went over it before sending it out.Way,Way to many fuck ups.I'm thinking about getting another editor also.I'm using this editor with a built in FTP program and it's cool and all but it's almost TOO convenient.I'm always uploading even when I don't have to and thats part of my problem also.Well anyway,I hope I still have time to change my "village idiot" status around here LOL!

MrYum · 2006-03-17, 01:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Star Man

Yeah,I should have went over it before sending it out.Way,Way to many fuck ups.I'm thinking about getting another editor also.I'm using this editor with a built in FTP program and it's cool and all but it's almost TOO convenient.I'm always uploading even when I don't have to and thats part of my problem also.Well anyway,I hope I still have time to change my "village idiot" status around here LOL!

Regarding the editor...I'm a big believer in hand coding. If you must use an editor, make sure you know every piece of superfluous code it inserts doesn't cause problems.

Anything that insists on uploading as you build...I wouldn't touch. Those are functions I prefer to keep separate.

You've got nothing to worry about with the 'village idiot' status. There are MUCH more capable candidates around here for that title! Actually, I'll bet you can find a thread right now that trumps your minor transgressions quite easily

Star Man · 2006-03-17, 02:35 PM

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You've got nothing to worry about with the 'village idiot' status. There are MUCH more capable candidates around here for that title! Actually, I'll bet you can find a thread right now that trumps your minor transgressions quite easily

Well thats a relief! It's good that I can tell myself "My free sites look like I paid a second grader to make them.I actually attempted to pawn off interracial smut to boob lovers and some dude in bum f#ck Egypt is making me his bitch by getting more traffic then me on MY server(hot link post)" And I can still say "OH YEAH??.......Look at THAT IDIOT!!!!"

I love it!!!

MrYum · 2006-03-17, 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Star Man

Well thats a relief! It's good that I can tell myself "My free sites look like I paid a second grader to make them.I actually attempted to pawn off interracial smut to boob lovers and some dude in bum f#ck Egypt is making me his bitch by getting more traffic then me on MY server(hot link post)" And I can still say "OH YEAH??.......Look at THAT IDIOT!!!!"

I love it!!!

2006-03-16, 11:10 PM	#1
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Quick review please Hey Just wanted to know if this one is ready for take off.As always,thanks http://www.dickheadshit.com/bustychristy.html

2006-03-17, 12:00 AM	#2
natalie Whoo! 9/10 the way to buddy plays in "The Christ from Oz"! Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Australia Posts: 921	here goes.. sorry if i offend, not in a great mood lol.. Recips: PK's has a enter on it which may be a prob with some ll's cos its above the real enter link, Mr Yums text is invisible and I think the recip table is ugly. 2nd page: The text "Free Gallery 1" goes to the wrong gallery. You really should be doing free sites in subdirectorys. I don't like your gallery layouts, they look messy to me. Maybe line the thumbs up better. thats all I got, a bit blunt but hey... __________________ No 2257 woes with Retroraunch Submit to my Punani And my Pink Pussy

2006-03-17, 03:29 AM	#4
flyeruk With $10,000, we'd be millionaires! We could buy all kinds of useful things like ... love! Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: North East, UK Posts: 319	Hey, Hoes banner also has 'Enter Now' on it. And like Natalie pointed out, most linklists request that the submitted page be an index page within a folder. So you could have it like this: http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/index.html ---> http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/main.html ---> http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery1.html http://www.yoursite.com/bustychristy/gallery2.html Try to keep each site within the one folder, some linklists don't like directory changes within the site. Hope this helps Lisa __________________ Clixxx4porn \| Adult XXX \| Erection Zone

2006-03-17, 09:36 AM	#6
Halfdeck You can now put whatever you want in this space :) Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: New Haven, CT Posts: 985	As I mentioned before, using paysite name for your free site title will get you rejected by some reviewers. "Enter The Free Galleries" is roman maroni (defies English grammar). "The free galleries" is implying there's only ONE free gallery from a reader's point of view, which just doesn't make sense because there are a crapload of free galleries out there on the net. Also, try not to use the word "free" too freely... http://www.dickheadshit.com/images/busty10.jpg <--- This thumb doesn't correspond with the big pic I'm seeing. In fact, I see the same thumbnail dead center on gallery 2. Personally, I don't like how you laid out your recip table either; the recips look squished together and should be spaced out more evenly. I'd also remove banners to other sites from your sponsor and just focus on one paysite. Right now it feels like you're promoting MacDonalds and Wendys with one commercial. EDIT: And next time, please ask for a review before you actually submit. Otherwise we're all wasting our breath __________________ Success is going from failure to failure without a loss of enthusiasm.

2006-03-17, 11:04 AM	#7
MrYum Arghhhh...submit yer sites ya ruddy swabs! Join Date: May 2004 Location: Sunny Florida! Posts: 5,108	Hey there Star Man...I sent you a PM about this site when I reviewed it last night. __________________ Porno Flixxx Submissions SOTI Site Submissions Free Porn Resource Submissions

2006-03-17, 11:52 AM	#8
Star Man A boy without mischief is like a bowling ball without a liquid center Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: clevel.......don't make me say it! Posts: 436	Yeah,I should have went over it before sending it out.Way,Way to many fuck ups.I'm thinking about getting another editor also.I'm using this editor with a built in FTP program and it's cool and all but it's almost TOO convenient.I'm always uploading even when I don't have to and thats part of my problem also.Well anyway,I hope I still have time to change my "village idiot" status around here LOL!