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2006-07-24, 11:08 PM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Free Site Review
If anyone is bored and has the time to review my first freesite please check this link out:
http://www.xxxutopia.com/fs/1/teen/index.html Thanks. |
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2006-07-24, 11:44 PM
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on vacation
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 I've got a minute so I'll give it a shot  -you're missing your HTML declaration in your source code, this has been discussed here and apparently it can mess up your page in certain browsers - the banner on the index page says 'enter here' which is a no-no; the only enter link on the index should be to the main page - your colors don't work too well, it's hard to see the pink text on the blue background - you may want to change from the default font & make the text links a bit bigger, same reason - they're hard to see - the AFF banner on the index page won't fly - most (if not all) LLs don't like java on freesites - you're going to need a title (3-4 words) and description visible on the index page at least, something that describes the site without using the same name as the paysite - the thumbs on the galleries are distorted, you should resize them not force the sizing on the page - the big pics are a bit heavy, you'll want to keep them under 80kb, ideally around 40-60 - those big pics on the gallery pages are completely blind, you'll get rejected for that alone. You can't have a thumb going to the paysite, which is what it looks like. that's just a quick glimpse, others may have more advice for you. Don't take anything personally, it's actually a pretty clean site & just needs some tweaking |
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2006-07-25, 12:24 AM
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Madness is like gravity. All it takes is a little... push.
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: California
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Also: I count 5 outgoing links on your gallery pages. Needs to be 3.
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2006-07-25, 04:42 AM
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Former pr0n slinger.
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Ponygirl and virgohippy summed it all up. Take their advice, change what has to be changed and ask for another review. Before you know it you'll be making millions
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2006-07-25, 04:45 AM
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Madness is like gravity. All it takes is a little... push.
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: California
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2006-07-25, 05:01 PM
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Internet! Is that thing still around?
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Ok I fixed up most of the problems I think. Take a look again if someone has a chance. Thanks.
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2006-07-25, 05:12 PM
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Former pr0n slinger.
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That's much better already, your thumbs still look a bit distorted and you have a few pics/thumbs that appear on the site more than once. Never use a thumb and picture more than once.
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Linear Mode
