3rd and final review pleasey

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 09:54 AM

Thanks guys, I really really really appreciate all your help! I just wanna make sure I have this down pat so you list them. last time I'll bug you about them, promise! I still have to do the recip table along with any changes you guys want. Any changes need to be made?
http://www.browselingerie.com/yurizan/index.html

Fonz · 2008-07-25, 10:06 AM

That girl is too hot for a freesite

I think you've got it pretty much down.

Although some anal reviewers might take offense on that "Click here" on your very first banner but I wouldn't worry about it.
Submit it and go fishing

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 10:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fonz

That girl is too hot for a freesite

I think you've got it pretty much down.

Although some anal reviewers might take offense on that "Click here" on your very first banner but I wouldn't worry about it.
Submit it and go fishing

all the banners in the webmaster tools have click here on them

bluebrit · 2008-07-25, 10:35 AM

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Originally Posted by lazzlo

all the banners in the webmaster tools have click here on them

The site looks good and I would list it but if your concerned, you could do a title tag for the banners saying "click here to visit the main tour". That takes care of the issue of having click here on the banner itself, which could be regarded as misleading.

I would also suggest you put something on the index page of your domain too

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 10:45 AM

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Originally Posted by bluebrit

The site looks good and I would list it but if your concerned, you could do a title tag for the banners saying "click here to visit the main tour". That takes care of the issue of having click here on the banner itself, which could be regarded as misleading.

I would also suggest you put something on the index page of your domain too

ok thanks, i will do the tag, and i was going to do that index before subbing

these freesites are a great way to utilize domains i have laying around.

annie_cash · 2008-07-25, 10:56 AM

Check out the background color of both galleries; it's different from the color on the index and main page. Some link list won't like that because it might look like those pages aren't part of the same freesite. Try to keep the same design for the whole site. And always try to change your templates so they dont look all the same (you can repeat templates over a months or so)

Other than that, and what Fonz and Bluebrit said before, I think it looks fine

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 10:57 AM

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Originally Posted by bluebrit

The site looks good and I would list it but if your concerned, you could do a title tag for the banners saying "click here to visit the main tour". That takes care of the issue of having click here on the banner itself, which could be regarded as misleading.

I would also suggest you put something on the index page of your domain too

I dunno if I added the tags right? i added some tho.

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 10:58 AM

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Originally Posted by annie_cash

Check out the background color of both galleries; it's different from the color of the index and main page. Some link list don't like that because it might look like those pages arent part of the same freesite. Try to keep the same design for the whole site

And always try to change your templates and keep them fresh (you can repeat templates over a months or so)

Other than that, and what Fonz and Bluebrit said before, I think it looks fine

thanks annie, i was trying to change the gallerys cause i was told it was good too. i matched the backgrounds to the lingerie yuri is wearing in the sets. if enough say all pages have to be the same colour, i'll change it. thanks again for your help

bluebrit · 2008-07-25, 11:19 AM

You did not have to use the exact text "click here to visit the main tour", which does work on your banners by the way.

You could just as easily spice it up by saying "Click here to view the main tour and see even more photos of the sexy girl featured on this freesite".

Anything you can add to your FS to bring in more people is always going to be better for you.

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 11:29 AM

thanks for the tip!

lazzlo · 2008-07-25, 04:31 PM

im glad i posted, thx again annie, all pages have the same color now

NY Jester · 2008-07-25, 05:56 PM

Looking good lazz. You have come a long way in such a short time...

Oh and welcome to GGnJ btw

papagmp · 2008-07-26, 04:21 PM

Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip

pc · 2008-07-26, 06:51 PM

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Originally Posted by papagmp

Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip

Tekster · 2008-07-26, 11:28 PM

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Originally Posted by papagmp

Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip

Yeah, that is a big problem.

Licker4U · 2008-07-27, 10:59 AM

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Originally Posted by papagmp

Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip

Mine isn't there either

lazzlo · 2008-07-28, 12:09 AM

get u all on the next jobby thanks guys!

2008-07-25, 09:54 AM	#1
lazzlo A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 55	3rd and final review pleasey Thanks guys, I really really really appreciate all your help! I just wanna make sure I have this down pat so you list them. last time I'll bug you about them, promise! I still have to do the recip table along with any changes you guys want. Any changes need to be made? http://www.browselingerie.com/yurizan/index.html __________________

2008-07-25, 10:06 AM	#2
Fonz Former pr0n slinger. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Antwerp, Belgium Posts: 7,932	That girl is too hot for a freesite I think you've got it pretty much down. Although some anal reviewers might take offense on that "Click here" on your very first banner but I wouldn't worry about it. Submit it and go fishing __________________ See how I abuse little trees on my Shumi no Bonsai Blog

2008-07-25, 10:56 AM	#6
annie_cash Hello, is this President Clinton? Good! I figured if anyone knew where to get some tang it would be you Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Montevideo Posts: 449	Check out the background color of both galleries; it's different from the color on the index and main page. Some link list won't like that because it might look like those pages aren't part of the same freesite. Try to keep the same design for the whole site. And always try to change your templates so they dont look all the same (you can repeat templates over a months or so) Other than that, and what Fonz and Bluebrit said before, I think it looks fine __________________ >Submit your freesites here ICQ - 431294227

2008-07-25, 11:29 AM	#10
lazzlo A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 55	thanks for the tip! __________________

2008-07-25, 04:31 PM	#11
lazzlo A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 55	im glad i posted, thx again annie, all pages have the same color now __________________

2008-07-25, 11:19 AM	#9
bluebrit Along for the ride and loving it. Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 1,873	You did not have to use the exact text "click here to visit the main tour", which does work on your banners by the way. You could just as easily spice it up by saying "Click here to view the main tour and see even more photos of the sexy girl featured on this freesite". Anything you can add to your FS to bring in more people is always going to be better for you.

2008-07-25, 05:56 PM	#12
NY Jester ICQ:147079406 Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: RockMEHardplace Posts: 2,996	Looking good lazz. You have come a long way in such a short time... Oh and welcome to GGnJ btw __________________ The Sexy Side of Porn

2008-07-26, 04:21 PM	#13
papagmp That'll teach you to leave your sister unattended..... Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Colorado Springs Posts: 1,803	Only problem I can find is it doesn't have my recip __________________ Submit: OutlawFreePorn

2008-07-28, 12:09 AM	#17
lazzlo A woman is like beer. They look good, they smell good, and you'd step over your own mother just to get one! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Toronto Posts: 55	get u all on the next jobby thanks guys! __________________