feedback on my new design for expresswritersonline

TrainWreckContent · 2011-04-05, 12:25 PM

I would like some feedback on my new site www.expresswritersonline.com. I have redone the site in word press and gotten rid of the flash site we were using. We still need to update the text on the site but i am looking for feedback on the design? Any input is greatly appricated!!

Voltar · 2011-04-05, 01:52 PM

simple and clean looking...
not as fast loading as it could be(but not a slow turd either), but the head tag is just stuffed like a thanksgiving day turkey with stuff isn't it... that whole page could be done alot lighter in a pure html and one animated gif, if you are loking at that aspect of it..and you need some SEO work done on it...i know you mentioned you have to update the text..but make sure you tell them why you are there and where your animated quotes come from..they sort of hang there making you wonder if they are made up or not..
there you go...you asked

TrainWreckContent · 2011-04-07, 09:49 PM

I finally got the text updated. Let me know what you think.

2011-04-05, 12:25 PM	#1
TrainWreckContent Ahhh ... sweet pity. Where would my love life be without it? Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 203	feedback on my new design for expresswritersonline I would like some feedback on my new site www.expresswritersonline.com. I have redone the site in word press and gotten rid of the flash site we were using. We still need to update the text on the site but i am looking for feedback on the design? Any input is greatly appricated!! __________________ http://www.trainwreckcontent.com/cart/index.php & http://adultcontentsource.com

2011-04-05, 01:52 PM	#2
Voltar Ahhh ... sweet pity. Where would my love life be without it? Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: 5 minutes from the Golden Dome Posts: 208	simple and clean looking... not as fast loading as it could be(but not a slow turd either), but the head tag is just stuffed like a thanksgiving day turkey with stuff isn't it... that whole page could be done alot lighter in a pure html and one animated gif, if you are loking at that aspect of it..and you need some SEO work done on it...i know you mentioned you have to update the text..but make sure you tell them why you are there and where your animated quotes come from..they sort of hang there making you wonder if they are made up or not.. there you go...you asked __________________ Great, Cheap, and Reliable Hosting Get $25 credit when you join M3Server HERE!

2011-04-07, 09:49 PM	#3
TrainWreckContent Ahhh ... sweet pity. Where would my love life be without it? Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 203	I finally got the text updated. Let me know what you think. __________________ http://www.trainwreckcontent.com/cart/index.php & http://adultcontentsource.com