Please review this site

RawAlex · 2005-01-22, 08:11 PM

I still think the message is confused - your talking abuot masturbation and giant rubber toys, and the galleries are softcore cutie stuff.

Worse, you have a great sales pitch on the bottom on the index page, and NO LINK TO THE SPONSOR! Just like any other business, you have to ask for the sale. Why put that down there, let them read for all that time, and the only thing they can do is click enter to go to your free site?

Your sales pitch should match the content, or the content should match the pitch. Otherwise you will get listed in softcore cutie sections on link lists, and those people aren't asking for dildo ramming hardcore.

That's just me.

Alex

2005-01-22, 08:11 PM	#12
RawAlex Took the hint. Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 5,597	I still think the message is confused - your talking abuot masturbation and giant rubber toys, and the galleries are softcore cutie stuff. Worse, you have a great sales pitch on the bottom on the index page, and NO LINK TO THE SPONSOR! Just like any other business, you have to ask for the sale. Why put that down there, let them read for all that time, and the only thing they can do is click enter to go to your free site? Your sales pitch should match the content, or the content should match the pitch. Otherwise you will get listed in softcore cutie sections on link lists, and those people aren't asking for dildo ramming hardcore. That's just me. Alex