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Originally Posted by RawAlex

I still think the message is confused - your talking abuot masturbation and giant rubber toys, and the galleries are softcore cutie stuff.

Worse, you have a great sales pitch on the bottom on the index page, and NO LINK TO THE SPONSOR!

That really is a GREAT ad on bottom of the first page... and definitely needs a link!! I even wanted to click it to find out more! I would use that on the main page as my feature sales copy.

I don't sgree with Alex about the relevence of content though.. a linklist might prefer to see a Dildo if you mention a dildo... but I don't think surfers would find your ad copy off topic and I really like the way you use the softcore pics to tease harcore buyers.

I would not appreciate you trying to target the paysite's copy to hit SE terms that people will already be using to find my site, if I owned FTV.. they may not mind though.