Am I missing something? New to making/submitting TGPs

SecretEden · 2006-05-18, 12:26 PM

Im a newbie to gallery making too, but ill give you my feedback.

I dont like the font used in the banner at the top - is that your choice or one provided by the site? I would change it. I dont feel that the grammar is very good, which kind of implies an unprofessional site to me.

It needs to be centered definately. I dont feel the text should be all in one block - maybe space it out between the rows of images?

That ice castle link, what does that have to do with your site? imo it looks kinda out of place.

The recips look a bit of a last minute thought, maybe thats why the reviewers are turning you down? Show them you care about their sites.

Nice content though, gives a good feel for the site, and the colouring of the page seems to imply debauchery. Which is good

Hope that helps, im not trying to be horrible, just giving you my opinion.

Good luck

2006-05-18, 12:26 PM	#3
SecretEden If something goes wrong at the plant, blame the guy who can't speak English Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 34	Im a newbie to gallery making too, but ill give you my feedback. I dont like the font used in the banner at the top - is that your choice or one provided by the site? I would change it. I dont feel that the grammar is very good, which kind of implies an unprofessional site to me. It needs to be centered definately. I dont feel the text should be all in one block - maybe space it out between the rows of images? That ice castle link, what does that have to do with your site? imo it looks kinda out of place. The recips look a bit of a last minute thought, maybe thats why the reviewers are turning you down? Show them you care about their sites. Nice content though, gives a good feel for the site, and the colouring of the page seems to imply debauchery. Which is good Hope that helps, im not trying to be horrible, just giving you my opinion. Good luck