Another freesite review please

[Halfdeck]

Good job...I don't see any obvious infractions except maybe pictures that look almost like vid caps (but not quite), Roman Maroni, and your server feels a bit slow.

"Tired of searching the best hardcore sex?" Tired of searching FOR the best. Also, avoid the word "best" -- some reviewers regard it as false advertising.

"Never search for you porn again" Never search for porn again

"unlimited porn downloads updated daily!" How can downloads be updated daily? You mean the paysite is updated daily.

"I was doubting to go closer" I hesitated to approach

"So here the pictures, enjoy them!!" here ARE the pictures

"I found this site Porno Ground, its awsome" Use a period

Other minor tweaks:

"http://www.porn-4-free.nl/foresthardcore/index2.htm"

Avoid naming the main page index2.htm. Either use main.html or keyword.html

You have only one linkout / page. You can add 2 more per page.

Use different banners on each page, if you are going to use banners.

Use different text on gallery1/gallery2.

That's about it; good luck

[picXX]

As halfdeck says, just remeber you are not building these sites to give free porn to the surfers, but to gain traffic and clickthrough to sponsors to yourself.

You can have 3 links to sponsors on each page, use them.
for the "leave" button.. dont link to yahoo, google or some shitty sites like that. Use a mainstream sponsor and link it there.
Then u still have 2 more links to put on that page.

On your galleries: Put sponsor ad on the top , between and below the pics. add some tekst to the ad's that hit the surfer straight in his cock, so he just HAVE to click through and put up his credit card... then your mission has been fullfilled.

The pages was nice...nice layout, good text and all, but all in all this is no site that will put money in your pocket.

[Tvduijn]

Thanks for the tips guys. Ill have to work on my sales texts,I find it really hard to be creative and come up with something good.
And my english Im ashamed

Thanks guys
Thomas